Reviews for Team 7's Ascension: Lines in the Sand
helpimobsessedjk chapter 17 . 9/14/2019
I hate that you killed Hinata. But your story is still amazing just a bit depressing
Bosma19 chapter 20 . 9/8/2019
You are one heck of a amazing author have read all your stories and I hope you keep writing because your stories are how I imagine the naruto universe should be if they had make it more adult and realistic
Alechaos Ogigio 2 chapter 20 . 8/29/2019
are you planing a third part? cause this is the shiz, right there. loved this story the while time.
cannibal27 chapter 20 . 8/1/2019
hey Eilyfe I just finished rereading this 2 part masterpiece, fyi I am not exaggerating in the slightest when I say masterpiece, and I just want to know if you’ll continue it at some point. The ending of this chapter made it seem likely and there’s also so much left to do. They need to go to Iwa after all, and maybe to Kumo and Kiri afterwards. I imagine by the end of it they’ll be the monsters that everyone keeps saying they’ll the recordi If you aren’t writing another part I’ll be dissapointed but okay, if you never planned another part in the first place and I find out I will tear the world asunder to destroy you. Bye, you’re an amazing writer.
rosymalik chapter 20 . 6/15/2019
amazing this is one of the best works I've read!
MelissaKS chapter 1 . 4/16/2019
I just came across your two Team 7 stories. Frankly, I thought they were amazing. I normally don't bother leaving reviews on stories that have been out for years, but I just couldn't get enough of these stories and definitely see myself rereading them some day.

Honestly, I hope you continue this story line some day. I saw on your patreon that you are currently working on a new story. I'll probably check it out once it's complete (probably not before, I've been burned too many times by incomplete stories that never get finished to start it earlier).

Great job on the story, I hope you keep writing.
Moonttje chapter 20 . 4/5/2019
Wow it was truly a fantastic story you wrote,.. i couldnt stop reading it and i am sad its over now,.. is there to be a sequel to this with the third still fighting an jiraya still out there! I do hope so,.. plz let me know
CMVreud chapter 20 . 4/3/2019
Wunderbar, nicht ganz excellent, aber wunderbar.
Und da du keinen Nachfolger zu dieser Geschichte hast kann ich endlich in Ruhe schlafen.
CMVreud chapter 18 . 4/3/2019
As I read " the poisoneer..." it hit me, and I hit me harder because I should've known earlyer.
That they need some serious mixer for this shit, hence the poisoneer, or as Temari calls him, Kankuro.
CMVreud chapter 17 . 4/3/2019
Finally someone had some sense and taught Naruto Kagebushin, or handed out some Chakra paper and taught Naruto some WIND-jutsu.

And I have it on a fifty bucks bet that Senyaku is contolled by the Sharinhaxxx.
CMVreud chapter 11 . 4/2/2019
As I read it... It hit me like getting punched by Tsunade.
It was the scene with the pool for the kids.
Because their six month to-the-side show was exactly that. Looking if they could be trusted with a position of power, of leadership, with responsibility.
CMVreud chapter 10 . 4/2/2019
I really, REALLY, don't know how to get TO Suna by going north.
CMVreud chapter 9 . 4/2/2019
CMVreud chapter 7 . 4/2/2019
The one in which Naruto gets so detached from the happenings around him that he just offers "screams" oif pain in a rather sarcastic manner and makes sexual innuendos of it like "Are you sure it's not your first time?", "Is it in yet?", "Who the hell trained you? You are BAD at this." and then comes up with a total crazy story about things that definitely didn't happen.
CMVreud chapter 6 . 4/2/2019
Well, here we're back to wondeful solid writing.
Naruto being annoying and also getting under everyones skin, while actually tring to do all that subtle stuff. Sakuras part here could be seen by more than just that what it is and if she not totally forgot the teachings of Kakashi with "underneath the underneath" she should realise that this princess may poker high and risk a lot to escape this golden cage, even killing her family.
An Sasuke... I hope he's the next part.
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