|Reviews for Unity|
| Kawaii15 chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
YAY! good good
| KharmaSmack chapter 1 . 8/29/2003
Wah! _ I don't know anyone who doesn't appreciate a nice good fluffy sap chapter between their two favorite characters suffering from requited love.
...of course I'm talking about Kagome and Inuyasha, but they'll get a sappy chapter.
| lessa4 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I liked it! Update soon!
| Hysp chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
That was very sweet...
| Condemned.Angel chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
more! more! more! finish it! What are you doing reading reviews? Go! (makes shooing motions with her hands) go slave! Write! (Becomes big and scary and enveloped in flames with a really big wip) Write more!
...ahem...sorry about that...split personality, (nervous laugh),you know how they can be. (grabs an impossibly large bucket of water and douses other self, other self shinks back down to size.) Now leave before the men with the white jackets come back again! Remember,there are no computers or intent access in that white room! No more fanfics for us to read or write! (Turns and notices authoress still standing there) You're still here? leave already! go!shoo! write more for both this fic and Ai no Koino! more! lol, see yah!
| Ithilwen chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
Dark and interesting. I await the next part!
| vold chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
Oh this story was great! It was very detailed and accurate! Please keep going with this. I wanna know what will happen! Please update!
| OoshatiElf chapter 1 . 2/15/2003
update please! Very good! _
the one and only
| Kittydemon chapter 1 . 2/12/2003
i love it- albeit in truth i haven't read the whole thing yet- i've skimmed through a part of it! I love your style of writing! Please write the next chapter soon; and i'd like to make a note of this, i'm NOT just saying that- i am a VERY impatient person! WRITE FOR GODS SAKE! WRITE!
| Kayko The Original chapter 1 . 2/4/2003
Amay:We have read your fanfiction...
Kayko:And we LOVED it! We would really...
Amay:Appreciate it if you...
Kayko:Would update more often! Any...
Kayko:You! Have a...
| Crystal Twilight chapter 1 . 1/24/2003
Wow... I love this fic... You portray the characters just right... I hope IY/KA end up together... Omigosh, I've been reading the manga scripts online, but I skipped over quite a few because it would've taken me eons to catch up and I don't want to ruin the anime for myself... I had no clue Kouga was killed... Wow... He's annoying, but I didn't want him to die... I hope you update soon! Ja! _
| Jezunya chapter 1 . 1/20/2003
waii! _ wonderful! now we just need similar fluffy sap for Inu/Kag! please? Update soon! (and work on on Ai no Koinu!)
| Kiora chapter 1 . 1/20/2003
*prod* ...mooreee! Not fair. Now I'm like *dependent* on you for two stories. (even though I havent really reviewed Ai no Koinu.. gomen;;) I don't like your version of the end if Kouga has to die though... *sniffle* Anyway, this is wonderful Your writing style is lots of fun! The Sango/Miroku moment was veryvery sweet now waiting for Inuyasha/Kagome one... *hinthint* 9_9 Update soon!
| Ookami-chan chapter 1 . 1/20/2003
SUGOI! OMG, Elora, this is absolutely fantastic! And I'm such a sucker for your work, you know. _~ I think you have a fabulous writing style and this story started off so very sweet. There's always such a "feel" to your stories that draws you in and makes you really get into it. The emotions and descriptions are portrayed beautifully. (see the jealous puppy *giggles) *grins broadly* I can't wait to see the rest of this story, and coming from you, I know it'll be fabulous.
| Rika chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
Wah! That was wonderful! I can't wait to see more of Unity!