Reviews for Flash Forward: Naruto Edition |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi areianjacks here, I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey can you do Kurama next like when Naruto tries to go again it’s the nine tails chakra that touched the orb |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next chapter please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Author-San just wanted to let you kneo you forgot a chapter for shino. |
![]() ![]() All very good up till this point. Naruto was already shown earlier grown up in his, Hinatas, and Shikamarus. Ignoring 16 year old him during Nejo's tragic moment. So why are they suddenly reacting to his older self now? |
![]() ![]() One thing that's bothered me for a long time is their ages. In that with ALL that life force as they grow stronger with life and spirit energy its seriously strange they have normal life spans. Those that are yang heavy in particular like the Akimichi, Senju, and Uzumaki in particular. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good story. Please tell me you’re going to finish it. You said you were going to. I really want to see more. I love these types of stories, and I loved “Into the Future” too. Hope you will come back to this soon. Keep ip the good work |
![]() ![]() Can you please show for Naruto and Sasuke respectively, Naruto Vs Pain, and Sasuke and Itachi Vs Kabuto, for Naruto it's because this is what lead him becoming the Hero of the Leaf so I'd expect to see a very important moment of his life being shown, for Sasuke, it's because I want him to see one thing, itachi fading away, because at this point he hates Itachi's guts and seeing him react to Itachi telling him that no matter who he becomes, he will always love him will be very emotional for him. |
![]() ![]() Please show Naruto Vs Sasuke at the Five Kage Summit. Specifically the Ultimate Ninja Storm 3 version because the flashbacks to their previous fights also adds to the emotions and tension to the fight. |
![]() ![]() Hey maybe you can Naruto and Sasuke see their future's again. Show all of their fights. |
![]() ![]() Make the next one on Kuruma. Have Naruto wants to try again, but it shows Kuruma instead. We have this. Naruto is in his office, and has fallen asleep, we hear a voice. Naruto, Naruto, naru- oh I'm not even going to bother with it Wake Up Idiot! Naruto hits his head and he screams ow. Kuruma: You do realize me living in your subconscious doesn't mean hitting your head would hurt. It holy gives you a concussion. Naruto: Come on Kuruma I just taking a nap, why'd you wake me up? Kuruma: You fell asleep while doing you're freaking job, at this point why are you even the Hokage if you fall asleep all the time. Naruto: Hey come one I still want to be the Hokage, it's just some parts are really boring. Naruto walks to a window, he sees kids playing with Kuruma toys. Naruto: Crazy huh, we both went from the most hated folks in the village to being loved. Especially for you huh? The self proclaimed embodiment of hatred. Kuruma: Tch. Be glad I helped, I only did it because you were the first human in centuries to treat me decently. Naruto: Ah what a tsundere. |
![]() ![]() Please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great keep the chapters coming |