That story actually makes a lot of scene

F spartus

I like to think Wrex's gun is just a remodeled ED-209 Arm Cannon, and now I'm wondering if they got some Cobra Assault Cannons.

Update soon please and I don’t think you should kill anyone off on virmire

Nice work

Dun, dun, duuun...
You're the Writer, this is your story, to go as you see it going. I think that if you just focus on putting to paper your vision of how the story should unfold, all will be well in the end.

Well that's one way to end a chapter. I'm not terribly worried though, cloning technology has come pretty far in canon Mass Effect (to say nothing of any additional advancements here) and unless I'm mistaken Rachni have genetic memory.

Ooooh, or even better, Robo-Rachni!

Oh and, uh, well personally I wouldn't kill anyone off, but that's just me. Definitely don't have the mental fortitude to make such a decision myself.

I love your story. Do it!

Wow! Twist and turns, I'm really enjoying this so far when I had some doubts about a Robocop crossover but great job!

wait that's the next game so nevermind

I don't have any suggestions about vermire. but I do like the Harry Potter Geth storyline where they pick up that tank bread Krogan that tells him about the Clones on that junk planet

Noice

damm shame about rachni queen
anway great story keep it up

Nice. The idea that some of them were indoctrinated as well makes for an idea I haven't seen before.

Whoa that was unexpected