Well that's one way to end a chapter. I'm not terribly worried though, cloning technology has come pretty far in canon Mass Effect (to say nothing of any additional advancements here) and unless I'm mistaken Rachni have genetic memory.

Ooooh, or even better, Robo-Rachni!

Oh and, uh, well personally I wouldn't kill anyone off, but that's just me. Definitely don't have the mental fortitude to make such a decision myself.

I love your story. Do it!

Wow! Twist and turns, I'm really enjoying this so far when I had some doubts about a Robocop crossover but great job!

wait that's the next game so nevermind

I don't have any suggestions about vermire. but I do like the Harry Potter Geth storyline where they pick up that tank bread Krogan that tells him about the Clones on that junk planet

Noice

damm shame about rachni queen
anway great story keep it up

Nice. The idea that some of them were indoctrinated as well makes for an idea I haven't seen before.

Whoa that was unexpected

wait who oh right the backround old military guy who never did anything besides complain and bitch about aliens and then it was discovered he'd had a change of heart quietly.

nice chapter thx for writing it interesting plot twist with pressley
as for vermire just let the main cast life and kill of some fodder marine's

Damn. Nice work. Keep it up.

great chapter, keep them comming

nuke from orbit

well guess that means Pressley was indoctrinated, kinda like the leviathans maybe