wait that's the next game so nevermind

I don't have any suggestions about vermire. but I do like the Harry Potter Geth storyline where they pick up that tank bread Krogan that tells him about the Clones on that junk planet

Noice

damm shame about rachni queen
anway great story keep it up

Nice. The idea that some of them were indoctrinated as well makes for an idea I haven't seen before.

Whoa that was unexpected

wait who oh right the backround old military guy who never did anything besides complain and bitch about aliens and then it was discovered he'd had a change of heart quietly.

nice chapter thx for writing it interesting plot twist with pressley
as for vermire just let the main cast life and kill of some fodder marine's

Damn. Nice work. Keep it up.

great chapter, keep them comming

nuke from orbit

well guess that means Pressley was indoctrinated, kinda like the leviathans maybe

i'd say kill pressley off in the next few moments

Kaiden, never liked him.

Please continue, I really like this story