Reviews for Jump City Assassin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is incredible and hopefully gets updated again soon as I quite enjoyed reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing talent is truly remarkable, and your story left a deep impression on me. I’d love the chance to chat about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist with experience turning amazing stories into captivating comics. I believe your story has incredible potential, and I’d be thrilled to explore that with you. You can connect with me on Discord: lishafang or Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible work! Your story is so engaging, and I can’t help but think it would make a fantastic comic. I’m a commission digital artist with experience working alongside authors to create comics across platforms. If you’re interested, let’s chat—Discord: danban1247275, Twitter: Mariegrey90. |
![]() ![]() ![]() will you update this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() shinobi of Greed please take your time to updating jump city assassin with chapter 13 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto and Shikamaru as partners |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol that the exact thing Batman did robin let the killer walk away to kill another one |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write so well your story feels like a movie. You describe scenes with great detail they are easy to imagine. The characters have dept in them and are not static, they react to the events unfolding before them in believeable ways and dont merely exist because the scenes need them. Keep the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, I couldn't have imagined you ruining this story the way you did. first, you mentioned that naruto could handle pain very well, that's obvious given he is the best assassin but still jumps like a lil kid when he stubbed his toe, has state of the art tech and is a genius but couldn't try to repair the phone, is very quick but shikamaru with no training is quicker than him and picks up the phone before naruto could, you gave no explaination to how shika found that black hood is namikaze, you hinted that shikaku died years ago living no one to train shika in his powers but is better at controlling his powers than naruto is and minato was, who are highly trained assassins and naruto also los his composure quickly when shika mentioned his real name, Naruto despite being claimed as the best assasin the league has, easily gets dropped upon by another assasin and the thief and the drug dealer at dock, he easily loses control over his emotion and it hinders his ability to think as you showed when he come back after the encounter with titans... this fic turned out disappointment real soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() State of the art techs, present in his building, a genius but still couldn't try to fix his phone Or. even save the memory by himself, nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter happy you are back |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I wonder if the Titans in searching for Terra decide to see if they could find her by scanning a photo through a database and then in fact, actually connecting to Naruto and Harley. They have the technology to do it, but the question is for what purpose would they be doing it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've one hundred percent read this chapter before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I've read this chapter before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A masterclass in how not to write Robin. Have you even watched the shoe? |