Reviews for I Heard You Were a Wild One
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
jaja aveces las cnaciones se cantan en el momento adecuado
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
jaja zorro cochino
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
Hehe that was very cute! Nicely done dear.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018
jaja pobre judi hay nick que pensamientos
techno02 chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
very nice, but about the sweat stained bed sheets, foxes dont sweat...
Fox Addict chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
right after i read this, I had to listen to the song
A Million Eyes chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Nice. Realistic, and sweet. I don't mind the subtlety of it all, though. I was hoping a bit more emphasis on Judy's hips or butt (I love those parts of her) but that'll probably take unnecessary space, so all in all, job well done. Thanks for writing this!
Mirruu chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Oh, I like it! :)
Doyle0915 chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
Aww. :3
It would be awesome if continued.
slybunny chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Oh Merlin, Nick promises to put bunnies to shame! I'm crying from laughter right now.
FancyPhoenix709 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
I have to say, it was way better than I expected :D Cute and funny.

Having said that, there were a few things that bothered me.

First of all, the structure. The breaks between the paragraphs are awkward. They don't belong, as the scene doesn't change at all. They just cut the action in strange places, making the flow feel off.

Another thing is in the story itself. What exactly was the reason for Judy to take off the shirt before asking if she could move in? It makes no sense if she wasn't going to ask for sex.
Meow chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
You missed an excellent opportunity spelling Wild without the 'e' in the title
Danny-171984 chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
Judy seems to be a little OC but its understandable. She was very daring. Also, saying that her parents are probably doing it right now was hilarious! I bet Nick wants to put them to shame ;)
Well, keep on writing.

Conan.212 chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Well it was not so bad:)
donuts chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
ell no
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