Reviews for The Fallen Chronicles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() welp I was so stoked to see a new update of this story but |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was as beautiful as the best is not an ordinary story, this is a work of art. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, what a ride. Almost no grammatical errors after 200k words and a well told story. Impressive work! Only thing that bothered me is the part where Judy stitches up Nick. You keep mentioning "incisions", but those are cuts made with a scalpel not stitches done while suturing. Also animal (and human) bites shouldn't be stitched up; they get infected and don't heal well that way. But that's negligible and my personal pet peeve. You tell a great story and I'm excited to start book 3. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see that the nearly universal rule of Zootopia FanFictionThe fox must suffer" also applies in this AU. FF tells me I read this fiction til chapter 25 which was the then newest one sometimes in 2016/17. I'm really excited to revisit our and see where you have taken this story. The first chapters are already great. Nice and clear dialogue, spotless grammar and a good atmosphere. |
![]() ![]() A la mierda, se pudrió todo. Buen capituló |
![]() ![]() Esta muy bueno |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I was just looking through a page of Zistopia fics and was super surprised to see that this was updated recently. I remember spending way too many long nights in high school staying up to read those long chapters as they came out. I always considered this to be my favorite dark version of zootopia and was really sad when it seemed to be abandoned. Now I've graduated college and come back to find there's still hope. Thank you a ton for sticking with this story and I will happily follow along as new chapters come out. Will probably have to reread a lot of this to remember what was going on again haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey man, thanks for writing this, it’s truly awesome work. Looking forward to seeing what happens. 10/10 whoop whoop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... This is so so so very dark... And i so love it... Keep up the great work }:3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... This is so so so very dark... And i so love it... Keep up the great work }:3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy heck in a heck basket was seeing this thing again a glorious surprise... Damnnn... I just look back at when I posted my last review. For chapter 50, the first in book 4, and... Just so much has happened in my life since then. And yet now this ghost from the old fandom has come back once more... Well, plenty has happened in your life too, what with your art career taking off. Now... As there's no new chapter, just a repost of the old. I'm half thinking this is just some glitch, tragic and teasing as it is. But if you're coming back. Holy heck if you are coming back! Well. We can all hope and dream. Stay pawsome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOUR BACK! OUR SAVIOR IS HERE! LET'S GO! HYPE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just popped up as recently updated, is this chapter new? HOLY SHIT ITS BACK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait is this Jacato the same one from Twitter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Revenge is on the way... The government she is coming for all of you. |