Reviews for The Fallen Chronicles
moons of jupiter chapter 50 . 1/9
welp I was so stoked to see a new update of this story but
mr. Bruhy chapter 1 . 11/13/2022
It was as beautiful as the best is not an ordinary story, this is a work of art.
Far313 chapter 31 . 9/8/2022
Huh, what a ride.

Almost no grammatical errors after 200k words and a well told story. Impressive work!

Only thing that bothered me is the part where Judy stitches up Nick.
You keep mentioning "incisions", but those are cuts made with a scalpel not stitches done while suturing.

Also animal (and human) bites shouldn't be stitched up; they get infected and don't heal well that way.

But that's negligible and my personal pet peeve.

You tell a great story and I'm excited to start book 3.
Far313 chapter 4 . 8/28/2022
Nice to see that the nearly universal rule of Zootopia FanFictionThe fox must suffer" also applies in this AU.

FF tells me I read this fiction til chapter 25 which was the then newest one sometimes in 2016/17. I'm really excited to revisit our and see where you have taken this story.

The first chapters are already great. Nice and clear dialogue, spotless grammar and a good atmosphere.
Blaky chapter 8 . 7/26/2022
A la mierda, se pudrió todo.
Buen capituló
Blacky chapter 2 . 7/26/2022
Esta muy bueno
SolarIron chapter 1 . 7/25/2022
Wow I was just looking through a page of Zistopia fics and was super surprised to see that this was updated recently. I remember spending way too many long nights in high school staying up to read those long chapters as they came out. I always considered this to be my favorite dark version of zootopia and was really sad when it seemed to be abandoned. Now I've graduated college and come back to find there's still hope. Thank you a ton for sticking with this story and I will happily follow along as new chapters come out. Will probably have to reread a lot of this to remember what was going on again haha.
olsmasher chapter 50 . 7/20/2022
Hey man, thanks for writing this, it’s truly awesome work. Looking forward to seeing what happens. 10/10 whoop whoop.
Wolfx1120 chapter 1 . 6/23/2022
Wow... This is so so so very dark... And i so love it... Keep up the great work }:3
Wolfx1120 chapter 50 . 6/22/2022
Wow... This is so so so very dark... And i so love it... Keep up the great work }:3
J Shute chapter 49 . 6/13/2022
Holy heck in a heck basket was seeing this thing again a glorious surprise...

Damnnn... I just look back at when I posted my last review. For chapter 50, the first in book 4, and...

Just so much has happened in my life since then. And yet now this ghost from the old fandom has come back once more...

Well, plenty has happened in your life too, what with your art career taking off.

Now... As there's no new chapter, just a repost of the old. I'm half thinking this is just some glitch, tragic and teasing as it is.

But if you're coming back. Holy heck if you are coming back!

Well. We can all hope and dream. Stay pawsome!
Random65 chapter 50 . 6/12/2022
FoxyWithTheMoxy chapter 50 . 6/11/2022
This just popped up as recently updated, is this chapter new? HOLY SHIT ITS BACK!
TheTenPlagues chapter 1 . 5/3/2022
Wait is this Jacato the same one from Twitter?
Muxeum chapter 50 . 5/14/2021
Revenge is on the way... The government she is coming for all of you.
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