Reviews for Who The Hell Are You?
BigKahuna chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
There is no way this is finished in one more chapter. Maybe ten or fifteen but not one.
Theresa471 chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
Cute chapter...
madcrafter72 chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
That wasnt quite the conversation i was expecting, and i am pretty sure Castle wont totally emjoy the cat fight he is about to witness, finding out that another woman was just using him. I am so looking forward to it though, dont wait too long
temple01uk chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
Nice conversation, they should do it more often!. Looking forward to 'the talk', although I was secretly hoping Beckett might just drop her of a roof...great read, thankyou.
elizalizzie chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
This took a turn I wasn't expecting. But I like it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm Widget chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
Hahaha! Oh, wow. This just gets better and better. Go Kate! I love it. Can't wait for more.
Maria chapter 6 . 3/28/2016
FLYING AND FLOATING - good impression! When will be be able to read it? I love this story and your writing much. Can't wait to read more of this ...
jmbatt chapter 6 . 3/27/2016
And the fight is on! I know which side I'll take in this epic battle. Hope Castle doesn't end up a casualty to it all. :-)
marie chapter 6 . 3/26/2016
love the story.. looking forward to reading more
Phaerre chapter 6 . 3/26/2016
Wow! This is such a fun read! I read it when I first saw it pop up but now I'm excited to see where you take us. Thanks so much for sharing your talents!
craspon chapter 6 . 3/26/2016
I'm appreciating the humor in this story. It's nice to see a situation where Kate is forced to confront her feelings about Rick and actually fight for him for a change. It's obvious to everyone (except Rick apparently) how shallow Alison is, let's hope Kate can help him see that.

There is one other thing I think it would be good for Kate to realize. While Alison is pursuing Rick for her own ends, the way she's going about it is something that Kate has never done: Alison is addressing Rick's wants and needs. She's giving him the attention he craves. All along, Kate has always pushed Rick away and shot him down when he tries to get closer. She just returned from a 3-month disappearance with no thought of how it was affecting Rick, and if Alison hadn't been on the scene when Kate returned it's likely that Kate would have continued to push Rick away because she 'wasn't ready' (as we've already seen on the show). You did a good job of portraying his anger toward Kate when she returned.

Kate is going to have to understand that it can't always be about her and her needs; at some point she's going to have to put Rick ahead of herself, no matter how 'broken' she is. Being jealous because she needs Rick in her life isn't enough, she must consider what he needs also. She has to believe that she's better for Rick than Alison is, and she has to believe it not because she wants Rick but because it's what he needs. That's an idea that not many stories have addressed (it's usually all about what Kate needs), and I'm hoping we can see some of it in this story.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/25/2016


Giddy with delight with this story

Thank you for sharing
Dandea chapter 6 . 3/25/2016
A lot of typos were present in this chapter. Please I suggest you use a beta. Kate and castle are very out of character, nowhere in any part of the series can I see either of them acting like the 10 year old children you've written them as. What are all these other people seeing in your story?
GT500RonSmith chapter 6 . 3/25/2016
I adore this chapter! Not so much the way it ended, but at least it had Castle thinking of loving Kate and not thinking of that other woman at all!

"Is there a 'her and you?" I know she dreaded hearing the wrong answer to that one! And then she never got that question answered at all! At least in this chapter!

But, the hay maker was the the next paragraph. Kate's answer to his question. Is she jealous? Yes, she is. She sees this perfectly beautiful woman that she has to compete with and she sees herself as scarred and imperfect and having no chance to compete with her, but she wants to. She wants to compete for him.

She wants to compete for your love, Castle. Were you listening? This woman that you just stared at with amazement at how beautiful she is. She wants you and she doesn't see herself the way you see her. She doesn't see the beauty. Whatever she may have seen before, the scars have taken that from her. She's not so sure she has a chance even though she heard you say you loved her.

Maybe Castle will see the light and make her believe that she is still the same extraordinary, beautiful woman she was before the shooting. He's very observant! Hope he's paying attention.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/25/2016
I love this story, thanks so much for writing and posting it
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