|Reviews for Rage|
| Gregoron chapter 24 . 12/9
I kind of thought laberinth would be found before the third task.
| KaTee19 chapter 10 . 12/8
I know I'm only part way through this story, but so glad about your decision to not give Harry a love interest. You're right, it goes against the story you are writing, and the character development of Harry, and I applaud you my friend. I shall carry on reading now.
| Gregoron chapter 18 . 12/7
Ok, you made Sirius a prick.
He was a bully in school I agree but if you go by their "real" characters and be all 'Snape is a misunderstood nice guy' pls remind yourself that not only had Sirius a traumatic childhood as well but that Snape was overall a selfish piece of shit. He bullyed studends, killed and tortured people and the one thing that made him switch to the light side was his obsession over Lily and his guilt for having caused her death (he was ok with her husband and son dieing and only wished that she would be spared) after that he behaved like shit and should have been nowhere near children.
The way he treated Harry while almost understandable was still inexcusible and the good things we know he did can be counted on the fingers of one person.
In my eyes his redemption in the last book, while sad and understandable just was not enough in the long run.
In comparison to him Sirius was almost a posterboy.
He never did think enough about what he did and was kind of an idiot but while I got bullyed in school and hate bullys I don't think he should have gone to prison, Snape on the other hand should have gone to prison for at least a good couple of years even if he turned around at the (very) end. How long before Toms fall did he turn again? A couple of months at best?
What he did in the second war against Tom was good in my book but before that he was...
One more thing:
"...that Snape had taken a huge hit in comparison to everyone else."
Are you for real. A fuck ton of people lost their homes and famalies and he took "a huge hit in comparison to everyone else."
Like wtf. Yes he lost the woman he loved (was obsessesed about and who rejected him) and was brandmarked as a death eater but this last part only applies to your story because in the original he deserved that fucking mark.
I will stop rambling now.
It is your AU so you can do what you want.
I really enjoy this story for the most part and I like a good writen Snape tho I prefer it if he still feels like the original Snape and not only because he insults Harry at every turn.
A World of Gray Clouds did a really good job on that in my opinion tho he is probably throwing a little to few insults around.
PS sorry for this, I am tired and exausted and should not have been so mean.
PPS were you ever with a psychiatrist and if so was it anything like this, because I was but I only ever have one hour at a time and also only one per week and let me tell you that is draining enough.
And I did not go through a trauma like Harry did, I could not even imagine him talking about this stuff for more than an hour without having a 'small' mental breakdown.
| Gregoron chapter 17 . 12/7
I can agree with your comment about flat characters but I would think that you would prefer umbitch over voldie then, because to me he is one of the most one dimensional villans and while Dolores is the worst kind of human scum she is in a way a far better villan than Tom.
Also I don't see why you would dislike Ginny (books) because while she is a fairly simple character she is only 'bad' if you actually belive her to have given Harry a love potion and if she did (no matter if it was just at first to draw his attention or all the way to the end of the last book) it would at least make her more complex (also kind of evil but that does not make her a bad character).
If you go by the movies i agree, because she had way to few scenes to even be considered a good sidecharacter.
Ps only my opinion, feel free to disagree
| noxenrom chapter 1 . 12/7
OOCness in all displayed characters. Hopefully it's just the first chapter.
| Gregoron chapter 8 . 12/7
Hermione was 15 and I think Victor was 17 but I am not sure on that one.
Hermiones Birthday is shortly after the beginning of the schoolyear which makes it so she is 12 for the most time of her first year and so on.
I'm not saying that you should have shipped them, just stating facts.
Good chapter overall btw.
| Gregoron chapter 4 . 12/6
This is a nice story so far, I expected something else but I can't say that I am disapointed.
| YokaiAngel chapter 31 . 12/3
| LadyPhoenix68 chapter 31 . 12/2
Generally I do not like stories with slash (then again, I don't like lemons, smut or porn fics generally). I know it is part of potter canon with Dumbledore being prime example but that doesn't mean I like it.
you have done snape very tastefully and very well written. I like the way that you have snape really developing as character and showing compassion without losing his sardonic wit, sneers and personality. You also did incredible job setting up Harry to heal to be a stronger person.
As a side note, I love the way you wrote luna. It is a new and novel power instead of her being seer.
| roseyred101 chapter 1 . 11/30
it would've been a better story if you made harry and Draco become a couple because they both been abuse and I would be like they helping each other to get throw it. it would be a great piece to the story
| Fallow54 chapter 31 . 11/29
xxxx KUDOS xxxx : )
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/28
Aww Hermione would've been a good one. I always loved the thought of them together instead of her with Ron the weasley prick!
| LeoESerpens chapter 31 . 11/28
Thank you for such an incredible story! I love Alex as an OC and he really enriches the story. Can't wait to read the sequel!
| attyfan chapter 9 . 11/28
IMO, the magical world has a weird sense of legal ethics. In California, Alex could get into a lot of trouble for negotiating a business deal (basilisk) between minor Harry and spouse Snape, without disclosing the marriage and having Harry go to an independent lawyer to review the contract.
| Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 11/28
Pfhahhahaha! Of course he did! God, I love Alex. It’s completely unfair. Love this fic.