Reviews for Rage
Gregoron chapter 4 . 12/6/2017
This is a nice story so far, I expected something else but I can't say that I am disapointed.
YokaiAngel chapter 31 . 12/3/2017
LadyPhoenix68 chapter 31 . 12/2/2017
Generally I do not like stories with slash (then again, I don't like lemons, smut or porn fics generally). I know it is part of potter canon with Dumbledore being prime example but that doesn't mean I like it.

you have done snape very tastefully and very well written. I like the way that you have snape really developing as character and showing compassion without losing his sardonic wit, sneers and personality. You also did incredible job setting up Harry to heal to be a stronger person.

As a side note, I love the way you wrote luna. It is a new and novel power instead of her being seer.
roseyred101 chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
it would've been a better story if you made harry and Draco become a couple because they both been abuse and I would be like they helping each other to get throw it. it would be a great piece to the story
Fallow54 chapter 31 . 11/29/2017
xxxx KUDOS xxxx : )
Guest chapter 10 . 11/28/2017
Aww Hermione would've been a good one. I always loved the thought of them together instead of her with Ron the weasley prick!
LeoESerpens chapter 31 . 11/28/2017
Thank you for such an incredible story! I love Alex as an OC and he really enriches the story. Can't wait to read the sequel!
attyfan chapter 9 . 11/28/2017
IMO, the magical world has a weird sense of legal ethics. In California, Alex could get into a lot of trouble for negotiating a business deal (basilisk) between minor Harry and spouse Snape, without disclosing the marriage and having Harry go to an independent lawyer to review the contract.
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
Pfhahhahaha! Of course he did! God, I love Alex. It’s completely unfair. Love this fic.
Talonwalker chapter 31 . 11/28/2017
Great story, I really enjoyed it!
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
Alex Dawsen has become one of my favorite characters ever. I don’t even know why. I suspect it’s his silliness combined with a dangerous edge of power, all wrapped up in gentle kindness. Why have you made me love yet another fictional character?
Guest chapter 14 . 11/26/2017
Wow that was a good one! I think it s really wrote in a good way. The conversation with Snape was realistic (well except for the potions) I hope that the next chapters are even good or better.
Good sunday!
era-romance chapter 31 . 11/26/2017
so it was a good attempt. if u aren't continuing outrage u may want to post an alternative version of rage where labyrinths bite offs Pettigrew and Cedric and Harry get away safe with voldie stuck in 'baby' form. do it right and you could turn dumbles into the dark lord Harry is supposed to take down and still have Alex and snape act as Harry's summer guardians. just an idea.
xTCatxx chapter 31 . 11/25/2017
Hey hey why don't you make it so as if Alex already adopted Harry and Severus knew of the only way to get the boy away from there is to adopt him but only did it whit paperwork after a while they could blood adopt him so he would look like them and Sev could give him an anty age or reverse age potion since he is a potion genious and probably discovered it but didn't bublish it since it needed 1000 year old basilisk bones or something haha that would be so cool Harry could experience his childhood again and actualy behappy
Avana92 chapter 31 . 11/25/2017
I really liked this story, and I look forward to reading the sequel!
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