|Reviews for Crescent Melody|
| Fang480 chapter 2 . 12/21/2016
Are you gonna update this? Or is it dead? I relly like the story alot and wish you would continue it.
| hunzbookwyrm chapter 2 . 10/22/2016
Would love to see where this story goes next
| ChaosDragon25 chapter 2 . 9/29/2016
This has only two chapters but i can already tell it is the beginning to something magnificent. I do hope this has not been forgotten since its been a little under six months since your last update.I eagerly await your continuation of this story.
| Super MKatR chapter 2 . 7/8/2016
Wow, please keep this one coming. so very interesting. kudos.
| ORKCHILD chapter 2 . 5/27/2016
Loverly, more, more
| PJandLGequalsLove chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
Very interesting please update soon
| thewolf74 chapter 2 . 5/18/2016
I hope that Harry and Luna remain close as they grow up. I hope that Sirius and Remus are ok. Please update soon...
| sjrodgers23 chapter 2 . 5/18/2016
hopefully he will catch up to sirius before he goes out to find peter, thank you
| MyCatHasNoFleas chapter 2 . 5/18/2016
I like it! I do have a question, though: How can Augusta Longbottom be proxy regent for House Lovegood until Neville comes of age? Shouldn't she be proxy regent of House Longbottom?
| geetac chapter 2 . 5/18/2016
| white collar black wolf chapter 2 . 5/18/2016
| Fairygirl34 chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
I'd like to see where this goes.
| Inumiru chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
So, know its AU and all that...but Severus wouldn't be the bat of the dungeons for a while (Since he doesn't start teaching till after Voldie goes poof) also, the Longbottoms were attacked a few days after Voldie goes poof...
| sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
love this story so far thank you thanks to Severus Harry should have a good childhood, Now if only he does not mistreat Harry when he starts Hogwarts. Severus should spend some time before Hogwarts to visit and get to know Harry. If he has to mistreat Garry at school so as not to blow his cover. He needs to explain to Harry that it is not personal that it is a cover for Harrys protection. That he has nothing against Harry and that he likes him .
| enji-benjy chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Okay, this looks good so far, there are a few confusing things, however.
The second prophecy seams to indicate that Harry/Luna will be either Ravens or Badgers, and that the snakes and lions will fear them, yet you say at the end you are making them Snakes?
From what you say in the challenge description, Dumbles meddles for the sake of meddling, if he does then, dam that's dark. To not care about anything at all like that, even meddling for dark purposes would be better, but to just not care...
You mention they can't leave a hide abroad but if Harry can delay going to Hogwarts a year, then they can leave and go to another country, as it obviously not a binding agreement to put your name down, if it was then it would specify the year as well. Otherwise, just say 'they will attend in the future', then have them do one year when Dumbles is dead.
I hope you write more soon, this has a lot of promise.