Nice little story so far.

While a KOTOR/Halo crossover seems interesting, the title of this fanfic can make the readers think that it will concerns Revan BEFORE he was mind-controlled by the Sith emperor Vitiate and the Mandalorian wars.

Just read both chapters and I think the story is good so far, I'll keep an eye on it.

This looks really good and I am interested to see were it goes.

Hmm there's promise, just few maybe grammar errors, when addressing groups like the Republic, first letter has to be capital, makes it easy to see it.

Now I'm curious how will this Halo character of yours will be like? here's hoping his gonna be able handle lot of stuff Star Wars has, there's quite lot of stuff that's gonna give him or her hard time.

Anyway if you're interested, got a suggestion if you want? up to you.
Good luck, till next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!