Reviews for Fate-In time
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
this is quite cool
PanicGun chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
This kind of story here is something that i've been craving for a while and low and behold you are the one to deliver my friend
G.B.L chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Beautiful! I've waited forever for a story like this!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
I will point that at this point, Shirou can change the path that this Arturia would take. She may follow the path of Saber Lily instead of the Saber that all of us love. Which means that everyone would know that their king is a petite girl.
Squadpunk 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
This ought to be fun. Wonder if Arturia will be made aware of the 'possible' future of when they both officially met at the grail war...
The Richmaster chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
That was a pretty good chapter; I enjoyed their interactions
Modify the Lifestream chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
a good ending without death? In FATE!?
looking forward to more.
kboomerjr chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Liking the idea for this story and I guess I'll have to wait and see how Shirou goofs up time. Thou there's one character that I would like to see in this in a not so villain light and her name is Mordred (yes she started that one rebellion and she and Arturia pretty much killed each other but only because Morgan La Fey was pulling the strings knowing Arturia would not have "maned" up and take responsibly thus having Mordred hate her "father" because of it and such). Don't know how but if you can pull it off I tip my hat to you sir.
reading in class chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
never let this die...
this is one hell of a story
remember the destiny trap
you cant change time if your a part of it

then after the grail war he saves her with a traced Avalon
or he completely ignores that rule paradoxes be damned...
pandawa chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Good prologue. I hope this isn't just a one shot though.
Ezok chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
even with his elemental affinity and origin of sword the magecraft types/styles/spells shiro should be able to use without a having a normal elemental affinity and origin are runes, alchemy, material transmutation which is the basics, formalecraft, witchcraft, bounded fields, non-elemental magecraft, reinforcement, alteration, structural grasp, mystic code and familiar creation.

pleas don't make the mistakes many fanfics do by thinking shiro can only do projection and reinforcement.
you can check the fate stay night wiki for more info
Cefaye chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
YOU. YOU AMAZING PERSON. Ahfbuydzmoixzgyf! I've been waiting for this fic f
ARSLOTHES chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Interesting concept
Serfius chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Ooooooh, very interesting! I'd try my hand at a fic like this myself, but I'm not nearly familiar enough with Arthurian lore to be comfortable with it.
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