i would love too see more of this story we didnt even get to see the really good parts yet "leviathan". though i have enjoyed all the querky water based technology. here is an idea the chances of this "made up piece of water-based technology" is the answer to entropy. just saying having a good ending in this type of story would be interesting. her slowly having op powers based on water would be great.

"Why Emma?"
"I wanted a Hawaiian pizza"
I guess that's the answer

Just blitzed right through this fic, and something I want to note is a few places where people abruptly switch pronouns for Riptide, and that you start referring to the ship that becomes Taylor's base as the Evermore, then later it's suddenly the Nevermore with no explanation.

Regardless, this is a fun read, and I look forward to more of it (and of Saito the Onmyoji, which I've been reading for a while now).

Dinah shouldnt be that high, thinker 5 or 6 at best. Also theres legit a shaker 12 in BB, and there are like 10 other capes that I can think of that are atleast rated 10 or above. Vista probably could make it since shes a shaker 9 at the age of 13

Her power seems weak as shit and at the rate you write it'll likely be another 20 years before she's even halfway competent. No thanks, im out.

I need the next couple shelters please I can't wait for so long please give me more... No need to rush I'm just beingJust being impatient keep going your own paste but wonderful work here I cannot wait until you show us what her next tinker invention is that involves water
Though if you're willing to listen to an idea that you inspired from the story
Maybe another story could happen with this MC being Is a tinker that specialization in trains Could you imagine it this engineer slush tinker builds a train that can hover over water use this water as a power source to build out then sit things from that water bill's trucks out of that keep on hovering like that you can use this as a basis make a train because no one expects the trainThat hovers above the water may be gathered it the engine block or into the forgery where that boiled water is piped into the engine room then transform back into water Is up there any solid objects after being Boiled or any non particles stuff like that would then be sift through going over to maybe another place in the train where it will forge metals
It don't has to be a train but maybe an underwater rumor that goes underwater sift through the ground floor and brings up metals stuff like that that's roasted away or just harvest from the ground floor of the ocean just A thought

I am loving this story - thank you so much. This seems a little like an ‘idiot ball’ thing though, other than facilitating people blaming her for kidnapping Dinah, why not send an email to Armsmaster and the Mayor to tell them what happened in detail?

Coil's little hobby of making and using stress relief timelines looks like a weakness to be exploited, though how to get to that point I'm not really sure.

I quite enjoyed this and hope you continue it at some point! A single point of oddity. You regularly flip between referring to the ship Taylor is using as the Evermore or the Nevermore. One chapter it will be one way, another chapter the other entirely. I believe the original use was Evermore, with Nevermore now being the more common in the latter chapters.

great story! can't wait for more!

This has been one of the better reads. I can't wait for the next chapter.

i just binged the entire written story so far, and my only regret is that there wasn't more to read. great work so far

Cool story and a fun read, thanks!

Yeah, uhh... Coil only reached out to the Travellers AFTER he acquired Dinah, so he shouldn't have them at this juncture

So you wanted to explain why PR is king in the world of capes, was it necessary to invent two dozen inconsequential OCs to do so? The UK doesn't have a centralised parahuman team? It does actually, they're called The King's Men, you could've used them. Also, London CAN'T be "one of the best protected cities", because - as you've pointed out yourself - it's been hit by Ziz, and is therefore, a walled off exclusion zone.