Reviews for The Watcher
Guest chapter 25 . 11/27/2017
WOW what a weird and disappointing ending
Guest chapter 24 . 11/27/2017
Engorged nipples? LOL Gross. Nothing sexy about that! And could you say juices anymore often? Gross. seriously, very UNsexy.

I especially liked the part when Edward "SLID WOUND" her in chapter 23 LOL
Guest chapter 23 . 11/27/2017
What an odd comment. "it was a gift I never imagined I would have" It make it seem that he has been contemplated this "gift" for A LONG TIME and he just never imagined it would be his. Yet this "gift" is Bellas thoughts. And hes only known her for a hot second.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/27/2017
Hot lemon!
Guest chapter 21 . 11/27/2017
Um what? She gets off because she was threatened? But she basically made people slaves for YEARS. Surely that deserves some kind of punishment. In the YEARS she had to come up with a solution, she didn't. Instead she did nothing. And with every vamp having a gift surely she could have came up with something. And if not there is one option. Kill yourself. Ya that's horrible but is it better to enslave numerous of your kind? Is her and her mates life worth that? She thinks awfully highly of herself.
Guest chapter 20 . 11/27/2017
You have spelt Esme's name wrong three times now. Its just two E's not three. Esme, not Esmee.

I feel like you may have pointed out the "defendants" mate so we will feel bad about putting the bitch down. While Aro's mate suffers. And it just seems odd that the vamps that just murdered someone are all about law and order all of a sudden. Why didn't Aro get a trial? And are his murderers going to have to have a trial also? Fair is fair.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/27/2017
Chapter 19 was weird.

Steve was chosen cause
Charles was chosen cause
Rosemary was chosen for...and not her gift
autumn was...

Who fucking cares? Just kill her and get it over with. Bella fucking destroyed Alex just because he used his harmless gift, who cares if the bond manipulator gets killed? No one should have that kind of power anyway. And it seems senseless to write about a trial that no one cares about. I really don't care what happens to the rest of the volturi. Should I? You haven't endeared us to any of them so why should the reader care what happens? The only reason I cared that Aro was killed so suddenly was because I didn't feel like his immediate actions warranted death, and it happened so quickly. Bella wakes up, takes to Aro ONCE and BAM theres a mutiny.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/27/2017
oh and lets not forget that in 473 years bella had NEVER seen a vampire until Malcolm...totally believable also...LOL

This story is turning into a fucking joke.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/27/2017
selkie, huldra, and witch? seriously? WTF?

And it just so happens that NOT ONE of the volturri knew a vamp that was changed that wasn't human first? Seems odd that creatures that have lived on the planet for a 1000 years didn't know about this. And bella was a 500 year old virgin? Ya, that's TOTALLY believable.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/27/2017
Bella gives her little speech and says something about the wounds in all their hearts...LOL she said OUR WOUNDS...OUR HEARTS. Um weren't you born like...YESTERDAY? You don't have any fucking wounds! You ever had someone stand up and give a speech and felt like...they had no clue what they were talking about? Ya that is like this.

Bellas 21 year old "wisdom" means jacks hit in a room full of old vampires. Demetri is hundreds of years old, marcus is what 1000? and here is this little twit speaking up and being a "leader" when she really should just sit the fuck down and let her betters speak.

Have you ever heard the saying "you don't know black problems?" Well, Bella doesn't know VAMP PROBLEMS. So she really should back the fuck off.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/27/2017
HUH? Edward says that he trusts bella. That nothing was done with malicious intent...pretty sure she fucking SHATTERED alec even though she could have stopped him without that much damage, how in the hell is that not malicious?
Guest chapter 16 . 11/27/2017
Ya that was totally believable. There wasn't enough info for the revolution...I actually felt bad for aro. As if Bella and Edward took it too far too soon.

And big words for Edward since without Bella there he would be dead. His mouth really ran away with him but apparently being near a shield like bellas he was given false bravado. Mr big man...LOL

What a joke this is. Bella wakes up with these amazing gift that the world has never seen and BAM shes taking out the volturri, next thing we know she will be "queen" of all the vamps...etc etc. so fucking dumb.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/27/2017
I don't understand the issue with Malcolm. Bella knew he was a vamp before she was turned...AND? Don't all humans realize a vamp is in front of them before they are either killed or turned?

Soooooo he didn't do anything? And your just making drama out of nothing?

I don't get it.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/27/2017
Now Edwards a damn joke. He keeps talking about how he will protect bella with his life...and its pretty obvious that Bella will end up defending them both. I don't really care for a weak male role and that's what Edward is now. WEAK, cant even defend his girl. How pathetic.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/27/2017
Strange that horses would allow a PREDATOR so close to them...huh

Its more believable that animals WOULDNT like them ...this is getting kinda lame
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