Reviews for Pas de Deux
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Wow. Just wow. This was simply incredible! I loved how Fakir and Ahiru decided to continue dancing even if the story has ended. Something about their stories, one about a duck and the other about a knight, both forgotten, has always caught my interest and delight whenever I see them together.
Lemondrop xxx chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Aw, that was sweet. The diaoluge could be more wholesome, but besides that, I loved it!

Lemondrop x
Mystic Spirit Angel chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Very sweet fic. This is how the story should have ended!
CookiesAreSoHot chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Omg, that was so cute! F/A rules in my opinion, though I feel bad for Ahiru and her relationship with Mytho...

Anyway, that was really sweet. Why couldn't the real thing have ended like this? T_T *Sniffles*
Innocent Sake chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
That was a beautifully written one-shot which truly put a smile upon my face. The last line was just perfect and the setting of it all was just what I wanted to read. Simply a duck && a boy who set out to find their own sweet ending
silverkrystal11 chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
luv it!
Aura Jade chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
fakiagirl chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
Quite beautiful! I loved it. The metaphors were well done and well-placed. You also got the mood right, and they were very in-character. Sweet, and really fits them. Wonderful! One of my favorites!
Blade chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Well written, but you nearly had me confused in the beginning, thank goodness you cleared up the fact that the new story was beginning during the dance. I also wondered how Fakir could figure out Duck's thoughts so easily, but than again, he too was thinking along those lines.
Samuraiko chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
One of your stories per day should be my cap, because it breaks my heart each time I read something of yours. But then I find this, and now my heart aches all over again. Damn you for being a better writer than me, but don't you ever stop.



Akaru-chan chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
wonderful. simplistic. sweet. amazing.
Siriaca-Ying-Fa chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
AAww, how cute! Congratulations you write wonderful, this is really cute.
LilyGinnyBlack chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
What a perfect little one-shot this was. It was so enchanting like the fairytale imagry that Princess Tutu has throughout its run as a series, and the characters stay true to how they are suppose to be. All the words flowed right into each other and I LOVED how you made them (in their new story) nothing special. She is a duck and he is a boy, yet, that is how things are suppose to be, and it is by having everything as it is suppose to be that beauty and a happy ending can be found. Oh, and I also liked how you started this one-shot, with it opening like all PT openings and that last sentence:

"She nodded, smiling, and they danced from the old pages of that story into the new pages of their own."

A much better way of saying 'And they lived Happily Ever After'. :D

Unexpected Hopeless Romantic chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
so enchanting.. so beautiful... i love the flow of the dance... beautiful.. superb! wah!
fakirhottie chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
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