|Reviews for Return of Evil|
| Artemis's Bow chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
Lovely! I love it! That's my style of writing too. A little fantasy & mysterious, not too fancy. Like it!
| daianapotter chapter 11 . 3/6/2013
love it )
| daianapotter chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
shang is not dead :D!
| daianapotter chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
"Ah..." A cry escaped Shang, one of the Orcs had stabbed Shang in the side. He fell to his knees clutching at the pain.
Mulan looked over to him and screamed out his name, "Shang!..." She ran towards him watching as he fell to the ground. She bent over him holdings his hands in hers. "Shang please stay with me, please Shang!" She gasped at the site of his huge gash in his side.
and the orc is alive and he allow mulan come close to shang...?
| daianapotter chapter 6 . 3/5/2013
I really REALLY doubt that Shang couldnt get wake when he sense someone specially knowing that there is orc and chi fu very near, dont put any patrol with mulan pregnant but well...
| daianapotter chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
oh oh this is not good for mulan
| daianapotter chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
they want kill Ho Chi (
| daianapotter chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
oh they are gonna be parents )
| daianapotter chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
love the romantics moments of the begining
| daianapotter chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
and how chi fu could scape?
| FLOWER chapter 11 . 12/29/2003
I FINALLY END MY REVIEWING OF YOUR STORY!
ITS A GOOD STORY!
PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER ONE SOON
| FLOWER chapter 10 . 12/29/2003
YOU ARE EVIL!
| FLOWER chapter 9 . 12/29/2003
ITS NOT CORNY ITS NICE
| FLOWER chapter 8 . 12/29/2003
| FLOWER chapter 7 . 12/29/2003