|Reviews for Evidence|
| Owl chapter 1 . 9/7/2016
You had me in stitches the whole way through. I loved all the gossip and Bogo's internal commentary. Thanks!
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Wow, way to capture the debate so well and love the choice for POV
| Jack Inqu chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
I just finished watching the movie (yeah, I know, I'm super late), and as to whether or not Judy and Nick are a romantic couple or not: I honestly have no idea. I could easily see it going either way, and I hope, if there is ever a sequel, that it remains ambiguous. As you pointed out, the debate is so much fun. :)
Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.
| GGMK chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
Haha, this was so good. The debates were so well written, felt like something you would actually hear in office gossip. And overall, this was just really funny. :)
| Amythista chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
This was super cute! :)
| Noctus Fury chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
I totally agree with you. Loved this so much. And it was so realistic and plausible.
| sondrex76 chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
I agree with that last statement(now I watched it in Norwegian[blame my family] so it wasn't as good as it should have been[stupid family, why can't they just learn to understand English properly?]) that last sentence was romantic...I think...honestly, I have no understanding of romantic relations(have never been in love, in a romantic relationship or been attracted romantically to anybody)
Thanks for writing and have a nice day!
| qweerlittlefish chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
Loved it! I completely agree with your authors note as well! Loved the final exchange between Nick and Judy on screen. And I loved this fic too! Seriously, it was like you were pulling in the same arguments that I've been hearing all over the internet, and then some! I love the friends, couple? debate and you really did it justice!
| DiegoRedeemedLover chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
It IS the most romantic exchange in any Disney movie! I agree with you on that. Mainly because when we see them like that, it's so casual and certain and sincere and sounds like it's happened before already - probably in an unexpected moment, but one that revealed their feelings.
And haha, oh, of course, Nick and Judy would forget to erase their previous exchange since they immediately ran right back into the case again!
["It would be so romantic – two star-crossed lovers who found each other while their tribes were at war, whose love survived and conquered the hate that had divided an entire city... Just like that play The Most Excellent and Lamentable Tragedie of Kovu and Kiara."
"I think 'cliché' is the word you're looking for."
"But I liked that play."
"Now that you mention it, it kinda reminds me of that play about how Zootopia was founded, how the different species stopped feuding and came together to live in harmony. As friends. It's always been friendship in cases like this. How does that song go? 'The fire of friendship burns in our hearts'..."]
Hehe I loved the TLK 2 shoutout! That was so ingenious! And is the song a reference to MLP: FiM's windigo episode?
["They're just like the couples in those films – Wrangled, Floatzen... you know, where the girl bribes or blackmails the guy into helping her."
"That means nothing! The girl did that to the guy in Wreck-It Rhino, too, and they sure weren't a couple."
Once he was back in the hallway, the words "They hated each other from the start" floated towards him.
The response was louder, indicating they were heading his way: "That's how it always starts."
"Why does everyone think anyone who bickers must be in love?!"
"I know what you mean, that's annoying, but they're not like those couples in lame movies that treat constant bickering and squabbling as shorthand for madly in love. It sounds like they stopped bickering and became closer than they ever expected once they realized their first impressions of each other were wrong. Just like that novel what's-it-called? Prejudice-something...?"
"Appropriate title. But friendships can start that way, too."
"Which can then become romance..."]
I dunno, I always thought that Ralph and Vanellope had SOMETHING going on... and hehe it made me want to laugh out loud, all of this gossip about those two (mainly because I'm sure something similar has happened in my life when my crush and I worked at the same store before we both quit) makes me wonder if they're aware of it.
Also, since Clawhauser is pretty much WildeHopps' biggest Shipper on Deck, I can just imagine him squealing with joy over hearing that exchange over that un-turned-off radio.
And then of course Bogo chiding him and planning to keep it a secret to drive the other shippers in the ZPD nuts since that seems like a very Bogo thing to do.
Great story! :)
| Aronim chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
I am firmly of the opinion that their relationship is on that knife-edge where a case can be made for either option.
But seeing as I'm reading this, I'm all for the couple. Because it is absolutely adorable.
This was quite funny and also a very accurate portrayal of how it goes when fans get a little too caught up in these things. And the reversal at the end, showing that Bogo is not a lick better than the rest, except for being less of a gossip.
Nice little piece.
| biddle29 chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
This was absolutely fantastic! I cracked up at the end when Chief Bogo was like, it's not even up for debate! They ARE dating XD
| A Million Eyes chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
Excellent question: where'd be the fun in that that?
Made even better with your point. Yeah, it WAS by far the best conclusive romantic exchange in any Disney movie.
This was very interesting. I've ready a lot of stories but not much with your style. It wasn't just a roadless drable, but a thoughtful sequence of Bogo's perspective. Thanks a lot for writing this! Very well done!
| psychedelicLights chapter 1 . 6/12/2016
Hahah! This is GORGEOUS. This is every single argument that has ever come up with any ship possible. Love. This. Hahah! Oh-my-goodness. I laughed so hard. And Chief Bogo! Such perfection in a single one-shot.
| Samiam2468 chapter 1 . 6/5/2016
You did not just bring up lion king 2.
| SeaTurtle77 chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
YES! I love the POV in this story. No cliche "he loves me, he loves me not" and no boring romantic scenes. Coolest Disney couple ever. Perfect story, all I needed after the movie. Thank you.