Chp38

Ok, now that was a wild chapter. Battle scene was well written too, but now, with Naruto being able to beat kisame...no one from runeterra except for the darkins and pantheon level beings should be able to fight back against Naruto, so if Naruto have trouble against the likes of tryndamere or Darius and garden or even jarvan and jhin...then your not doing the scaling properly cuz i'm pretty sure kisame at full power is stronger than them and Naruto manage to fight off kisame!

And finally, Naruto met kurama! Although it is saddening that they didn't interact more, but now i'm curious...how will Naruto battle kurama for his chakra and become friends with him...? I mean, Naruto abilities of nullifying the use of chakra would be completely useless to tailed beasts since they are chakra themselves, they don't use chakra pathways so there's nothing for Naruto to nullify...now i'm curious and excited to see how Naruto would go about that battle, especially the upcoming battle with gaara, although i know it won't be much trouble since kisame is stronger than gaara and Naruto could just heat up gaara sand and turn them into glass.

Ngl, it's satisfying to read the battle with kisame, especially when Naruto transformed! That was badass! That and it's refreshing to see that fiora, Akali, and irelia finally realizes that the Shinobi from the elemental nations are built different! Although, i think your wrong about having four s rank Shinobi to be enough to handle and take over lonian...heck, it'll on my need two S rank Shinobi...how so? Deidara could just nuke lonian and sasori can just massacre everyone with his puppets...now that is think about it, two is kinda overkill since you yourself said that the lonian soldiers are just around Chunin level...

Lmao, Akali, irelia, ahri and Ashe taking a peek at Naruto's dragon is the most amusing and hilarious moment i've read in this fic! Well, atleast now all of the girl's know about it and they can look forward to it, especially once Naruto learn the shadow clone jutsu HAHHAHAHAH! Damn, i can't wait for you to update this KG! This fic is just absolute gold!

Anyways, you did a great job at writing this chapter! I look forward for more! And hopefully, you update this soon...please update this KG.

Chp37

Damn, just one more chapter to go and i'll be done...this is just saddening since there's not much good League of legendsNaruto fanfics.

Anyways, you really did well on writing the scene of Akali hunting that bandit. Kinda surprised that Naruto revealed what he really is to his team...that and i'm surprised as to why Naruto didn't think of why Minato kept his dragon lineage a secret, but it guess it's all for the sake of plot. (I hope.)

Hm, it's nice to read that Naruto took notice of irelia stealth clothing, ngl looking forward for more amusing scenes like that. Anyways, if Naruto can learn water walking, does this mean Naruto will soon learn the shadow clone jutsu? Because it know for a fact that every jonin can do said jutsu. How can it say that? Simple, it was said in an episode(forgot what ep it is since there's too many episodes), anyways Kakashi said that every jonin can perform a shadow clone jutsu and atleast wield two or more elements.

Ngl, the way inari was handled in this story was actually quite refreshing.

Oh boy, seems like Naruto get a beating next chapter for his own lust for battle.

Chp36

This is an awesome chapter! The fight scene with zabuza was really well written! I'm surprised that Naruto used his dragon power's i'm looking forward to how Naruto handle the questions that he'll face from the team.

Hm, that vision was an interesting scene, but was that one of ahri skins? That's interesting, but what's even more interesting is the development between Akali and Naruto! Ngl, Akali is like a cat, once you've catch her showing affections, she'll run away, lol.
Looking forward to more scenes with her, although i'm surprised irelia is so calm about it.

And finally! Ashe, the first woman he summoned got to be with Naruto now! Damnit, i can't wait for more scenes between Ashe and Naruto!

Ch35

Ah, only two chapters away before i finish everything...damnit! Anyways, Naruto being mad that he couldn't learn the bunshin jutsu...does this mean Naruto learn the shadow clone jutsu soon in this one? Cuz that'll certainly come in handy and we both know it. Now, who's this women that Naruto keep having visions of? Cuz they're definitely not sona or kai'sa...

Hm, it's interesting how you started the mission, never expected for the demon brothers to retreat cuz last i checked, they we're rogue shinobi. But yeah, it is still interesting nonetheless.

Hmmm, as for fiora bit of this chapter...KG i know this may sound rude but we're you drunk when you created this chapter? Because it seemed like fiora had forgotten that she had fought side by side with Naruto when he was fighting Darius...like breh, it made me double read it just to make sure it ain't seeing thing's...so either you created this chapter in a drunken state or you just forgot.

Anyways, setting that matter aside, it's interesting and exciting that Ashe is finally making her move to be with Naruto. So, i guess ahri taking Naruto first kiss, irelia being Naruto sura first and Ashe claiming Naruto as her husband first...does this mean Naruto have every first time of his taken by his wives and not just one? Like for example, ahri took his first kiss, irelia his first sura, and Ashe his first official wife...? What's next, Diana or Akali or Leona taking his virginity? Lmao, it'll be pretty amusing if Naruto wives had a first for each.

It's nice to see that irelia is worried sick for Naruto, just goes to show how deep their bond is. But Naruto and irelia training, will this cause spirits to appear in the lands of elemental nations? Cuz if that happened then damn, many changes will happen.

Also seriously? Sasuke being the one to always ace the tactical things in the academy? Wasn't that Naruto of this fic thing? Like to always be on top at tactical things?

Anyways, this chapter is awsome. Also congratulations on having a kid!

Chp34

That's nice, Naruto finally be away from Mei...hopefully that'll make her gain some semblance of her independence back. Also really can't wait for the changes you have done to tazuna mission, really looking forward to this arc ngl.

Ngl, i didn't expect you to actually bring Naruto Shippuden dragon blade character's into this fic, does this mean Naruto would get another sword? That'll be awesome, especially if he gets the armor too.

Ah, wholesome moment between irelia and Naruto really is some of the things i look forward to in every chapter. Although it's good to see that Akali is starting to warm up to Naruto, looking forward to the chapter where she finally seals the deal with Naruto and become one of his fiance/wife. Also nice to see that it's irelia who gets to calm down Naruto first, ngl, it's really fun to read when you create a scene for just Naruto and one of his wives.

Gotta ask though, will Naruto reveal his dragon lineage or parentage to team 7 soon? Cuz i really look forward to their reactions to that.

Ah, i hope ahri would stay safe...and i really really hope she won't encounter jhin, that guy is just too crazy and too far gone.

Chp33 (CONGRATULATIONS ON GETTING 1,500 REVIEWS IN THIS STORY!) ()

it's nice to see that even Akali acknowledge that the Hokage is a powerful old man! Ngl, i wasn't expecting hiruzen to actually tease Naruto and irelia about their new relationship. I won't lie, i kinda thought that hiruzen was telling Naruto to be careful of a certain traitorous war hawk. It's nice that Naruto did get his own compound, especially since such a thing we'll be needed for Naruto wives.

It's rather heart warming and wholesome that irelia and Naruto kissed and spend the morning together in this chapter! Ngl, i don't know what to make of Akali reaction to seeing them do that, but i would rather think that she's jealous lol.

It's also nice to see that Mei is finally on her way of getting her independence back cuz seriously, she really does need that back, afterall once Naruto had gathered all of his wives from runeterra they'll be the one's that's gonna be sleeping with him. It'll be strange if that's not the case Afterall.

But it's nice to see that Akali thinks highly of Kakashi power despite the unpleasant first impressions, although i didn't really expect irelia and Akali to took notice of a certain uchiha hate and desire for revenge...but nonetheless this is a great chapter, so is the music!

Chp32

Ngl, listening to music while reading this really is refreshing, also helps in making me more immersed into the chapter.

Anyways, lemme guess, akari and kuroma (sounds like a morbid and shitty version of kurama name, ngl) are looking for Naruto...and if i we're to guess, they're family had been serving either Minato or kushina when they we're alive.

As for Akali, ngl, never she'd join Naruto through servitude, but still it's awesome that she's starting to warm up to Naruto.

And finally! Irelia and ahri have staked their claim on Naruto to be the first women that's engaged to Naruto!
Although i do wonder how fiora and Ashe would react to such a news, can't wait for their reactions! Although it's too bad that ahri didn't come back to the elemental nations.

Chp31

Damn, xayah really is stubborn, even when she and rakan are injured she still refused help from humans. Can't wait for everyone's reaction in the next chapter, although, i must say...where is Akali mother? She hadn't been shown the entire time in the past chapter's, even this one. Did she get captured or killed?
That and it's kinda saddening that the chapter isn't as long as it used to be, granted it's not short either but still.

Anyways, speaking the fight scenes, it was awesome! Word's simply cannot express how well written it was, heck, the fight scene was so good that it can be compared to a Fic called "ashikabi no Shinobi" and "devil ninja" both of which are good harem fics and have well written fight scenes just like this fic!
You've really out done yourself in this chapter!

Although it is a bit saddening that there's only 6 chapter's left...but regardless, this chapter was awsome! I also hope this means that Naruto won't be kicked around by mere Chunin level Shinobi or his peers. Since i can only see the one that can even push Naruto a bit is gaara and that's become of the ichibi! Anyways, looking forward to more man!

Chp30

Ok, now this chapter was fire! Ngl, riven trying to convince the soldiers she's not an enemy was amusing as hell, even more so when fiora showed up lmao.

Although it's pretty nice to see that Darius is acknowledging Naruto strength, that and the fact that irelia and Fiora stood by Naruto side was actually a pretty cool scene aswell!

And i hope that with xayah being rescued by ahriNaruto means that her people would make an alliance with the people of lonian.

Hm, Darius being a kage level is far off the stretch especially since kage's are supposed to be the strongest of their nation and i'm pretty sure Darius isn't the strongest in that regard. At best, Darius strength is only comparable to the second in command of the elemental nations. But if Darius we're to fight a kage? He'd get clapped without even getting to fight back, like how hiruzen could just fire at him all of the elements while enlarging his staff and slamming it down to Darius.

Make no mistake, Darius is strong but he isn't strong enough to be compared to a kage.

Anyways this chapter was awsome!

Chp29

Ngl, i wasn't really expecting xayah to not help Naruto and the other's but damn, she sure run away quick. Bug i guess it's understandable since Naruto and xayah have different reason's for being there.

Lmao, the tension between fiora and irelia is so good! I hope they see in Naruto memories that he just kissed ahri! LMFAO that would really be an entertaining read!

Also you've done well in writing the fighting scenes, again, it's really easy to envision the scenes playing out before me because it's so well written! Although i do wonder, why didn't Naruto just USD kawarimi to instantly appear besides talon? Could killed him easily if he did that.

And finally, to ahri and Naruto! FINALLY you've given us a scene of them both after awhile! And i know it's short but damn, that kiss that ahri and Naruto shared was worth the read! Ngl, it carried the whole chapter and the second thing to carry the chapter is irelia and Fiora squabbling...and lastly the great fight scenes! All in all, a great chapter!

And as always, amusing interaction between your wifey and you lmao.

Chp28

No banter with your wifey again, did you guys fight? Anyways, aside from the noxain commander's POV...everything is awsome! Down to the way the plan to delay noxus and to Shen and kennen confronting the commander of noxus!

Hm, as expected, it's Naruto that'll rescue Akali...although i wonder how Akali mother would react to the news of her baby girl being captured and tortured? Nonetheless, i like the outcome of Naruto fighting talon and Katarina!

As for Mei, why even add her? She's not necessary, besides, wasn't it already made clear that Naruto just views her as a daughter? Adding her would just make the story messy is what it would like to say, but in the end this is your story, you decide how it goes and all i can do is give my opinion in the matter and hope you consider them.

Anyways, great chapter man!

Chp27

Kinda saddening that there's no banter in this chapter, but hey atleast the harem is finally completely revealed!

Anyways, you really did well writing this chapter. Each scene was really portrayed well, to Shen and Naruto speaking, to Naruto watching ahri and irelia train and to Naruto ascending to the skies and bringing back hope and igniting the passion of protection from the kinkou order, everything was well portrayed.

Although i won't lie, i honestly did not expect Akali mother to show up. I wonder how they'll fare when they hear of Akali being captured? Wonder how Naruto react? How Naruto make his move? I can't help but look forward to all of this ya know?

Granted the chapter is not that long nor it's short but still, it would've been better if it was a long chapter just like chapter 1-15.

Chp26

An interesting start, looking forward to seeing how Darius, Katarina and talon gets defeated by Naruto, especially when they realize that they are not a match for a light dragon!

Also, was that Akali just now? Did she really get captured by noxus? Man i hope not, i really hope against all hopes that the woman they captured isn't Akali. Well, i guess the dragon tattoo just pretty much confirms it, i just wonder how Akali would escape or if Naruto rescue her? Man, i can't get enough of this fic, it's the best league of legends/Naruto crossover that i've read! The only one that may even rival this fic is "Legends Reviving" where Naruto was sealed away and later on, Naruto adopted two children from piltover and Naruto harem there is with , Evelynn and lamb! Man, i really hope you update this fic.

Anyways, it was interesting to see Naruto getting angry again, seems to be happening to often in lonian ngl.
Can't wait for more angry Naruto, since it's kinda cool...although, i'm starting to notice that the chapter's are shortening...i hope that's not the case for the rest of the remaining chapters.

Lmao, looks like lux is playing cupid between fiora and Naruto! And although i would've like to see lux reaction to fiora story, it's a shame it wasn't shown. But i do wonder, when will fiora and Naruto meet again? I really hope that they meet soon once more.

Hm, Shen's first introduction was... interesting to say the least.

Chp25

Hm, it's good that the other's are noticing the change with irelia and Naruto. But seriously speaking, does Mei really have to cling to Naruto all the time? Anyways, i'm actually surprised that "The void" is in lonian lands, also surprised that yasuo thinks ahri was the one who caused it.

Ngl, i was kinda hoping that Naruto and yasuo would've fought, but oh well! But i am glad that there's some tension between ahri and irelia, now if only ahri teases Naruto about taking his first kiss...! The situation, everyone's reaction and irelia getting more jealous would've been a fun read! What can i say? I like some drama between the girl's lmao.

Although i'm surprised that irelia and riven actually doesn't fear the "void" especially irelia considering she saw what Naruto experienced. Anyways this chapter is awsome and as always, you and your wife banter is as amusing as always.

Chp24

Ahhhhh, i feel the wholesomeness of this chapter, all hail KyuubiGoku! HAZAH!
Anyways, i really was surprised at how this chapter started, but with Ashe getting kissed by Naruto in her dreams! Is actually really awsome! Ngl, this revelations your making is awsome!

As for Naruto and irelia, it's really amusing to see her get jealous of Mei...although now that she and he have shared each other's memories, then i guess she won't be jealous anymore, huh? Or maybe she'll be like fiora who'll still be jealous? Ngl, i can't wait for all of the girl's to meet and find out that in some way, Naruto had been intimate with all of them lmao.
Also wholesome kiss between irelia and Naruto! But i do wonder, did Minato kissed karma? And if so, was they're relationship more than that? And this sura business is sounding alot more like a mate/marriage partner/lover ya know?