|Reviews for The Trapped Assassin|
| coldwinter122 chapter 20 . 6/19
Love this story! I selfishly hope you're still active and get the chance to finish this! It's really really good.
| Neil Sandford chapter 12 . 5/22
Exceptionally good story so far, wow! I Wish i was on holiday in Nice and bump into SW.
Can't believe so much has gone on in so few days and neither has blurted out there feelings to the other.
I am completely addicted to this story, dying to know where it is heading, will we have some angst involved with her decision.
I like how so far you haven't really repeated the steamy scenes.
Fluid story telling and only a few spelling errors, excellent work, thanks.
I'm pretty sure the rest of the story will be as good, if not better and will leave a review on after the last chapter, unless there is something I need to voice beforehand.
| berksboy chapter 20 . 5/24
That's chapter 20 finished, good ending, now have to wait to see if she was to late.
One thing I will say for this story is for a nerd he is one hell of a stud, Sarah I can understand because of the training and on the job but I didn't think nerd's were as knowledgable as porn stars.
It will be interesting to se where this goes, what will happen when Chuck's vacation will be over and he heads back to LA? what will Sarah do? will there be ramifications with the CIA? the photos? they haven't really talked about feelings yet.
I guess the nearest we have got to emotions is when Sarah spent the night with him before her big decision.
I wait with baited breath for the next chapter.
| berksboy chapter 17 . 5/23
This was a really good chapter, all the chapters have been great but this one is the one I was expecting, the build up to the decision and the inner turmoil and I literally froze in my chair until I finished it.
Throughout the story there has been a lot of sex, a lot, more than I was expecting and the word 'sex' was used during all those encounters, however, this encounter in this chapter you have used the other more meaningful word and was nicely added, at the right time, the difference between this relationship now and a mark, could this be the point of no return, she is now in deep!
Nicely written section at the end after the activity.
| CraigBes007 chapter 20 . 5/7
Hey this is coming along very nicely, hope we will not have to wait to long for next chapter.
| wow chapter 19 . 5/2
nothing but sex and a terrible joke. if i wanted porn i would not be on this fucking site. the sex scenes are decent but only because the story is decent. just sex and a terrible joke makes for a porno.
| Feynman1968 chapter 20 . 4/19
This was an awesome chapter. Ellie and Sarah was fantastic. Loved it. Sarah becoming a real girl is so much fun to read. I was trying to spread out my reading of this story, slow down and take breaks between chapters, but I couldn't do it. I tore right through it. Couldn't stop myself. Great writing. Thanks for putting this out there. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Feynman1968 chapter 17 . 4/18
So I found this story on the recommendation of a few other of my favourite authors. I don't usually seek out M-rated stories, but I don't shy away from them either. In this case, I find your writing to excellent and the way you construct the M-rates scenes to be descriptive, but not graphic. I am really loving this story. The conflict in Sarah and the building of their relationship is awesome! I came to this a couple months after your last update, so I am trying to get to the last posted chapter slowly so I can enjoy the story without worrying about getting stuck at the end.
Really enjoying this story. Thanks so much for putting it out there.
| phathead01 chapter 20 . 2/23
Amazing! Looking forward to 21
| michaelfmx chapter 20 . 2/19
Hey, welcome back again. I have to say that this is a very refreshing chapter. Now that Sarah's made a decision, it's clearly going to set a whole other set of actions into play. Highly, highly doubtful that Graham is going to let this go. That storyline isn't over yet. I'm still really excited to see how it plays out. How will Chuck find out about Sarah's past? Will she tell him or will Graham try to sabotage this relationship. And how will Chuck react to the truth?
But I was glad to get away form all that for a chapter. The snorkeling scene was fantastic. The interactions between Sarah and the gang were so refreshing. Sarah having a normal day, with normal thoughts, was something she desperately needed. And I love Ellie's...innocence so far, although it's possible she knows something's up, since she tried to pry into Sarah and her job a little.
Anyway, loved the update and I hope you have the next chapter already in the works. As always, if you need any kind of beta help, just let me know.
| Way to go chapter 20 . 2/17
Please don't give up on this fanfic. I'm really digging it. I don't think Graham is going to let Sarah go. I hope you have Chuck find out Sarah is an Assassin soon. Maybe have Graham use Chuck against Sarah. Anyway, just trying to add to your "think tank". Thank you for writing this for us Chuck fans!
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/13
Such a great story!
| Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 20 . 2/14
I enjoyed the Sarah/Ellie interaction, there were so many moments that made me smile—all the teasing about Chuck in a wetsuit, and Sarah’s reactions—and I like how you’re maintaining the tension with Graham’s silence. Great analysis of vulnerability in the final scene!
| uplink2 chapter 20 . 2/8
So great to have this back. Really great scene with the snorkeling as well as the added angst of Sarah's spy instincts being "tingled" because of her decision. I have a guess as to where she is going so fast and I hope I don't have to wait so long to find out if I'm right. Well done again.
| PeterOinNYC chapter 20 . 2/8
So glad you have come back to this story. Certainly one of the GOAT Sarah POV stories out there. I'm really happy you chose to let her 'live in the moment' in this chapter and not force a conversation between them I did catch how you have the two of them looking at each other now - and Sarah noticing it and liking it. I have always appreciated that your Sarah is doing this for her - her future - and while Chuck may have helped her realize that she wanted a future, he didn't have to be the future she was running towards. When you make the decisions based on your own wants and needs, they tend to be firm in resolve. Nicely done.
I also like how the possible (potential?) negative effects of her decision are running through her mind - but not dominating her thoughts and actions. I hope she gets to Chuck's room before he gets in ths shower ;-)
Thanks for sharing this with us - hope to see more soon.