|Reviews for A Late Night Stroll|
| Romulus chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Great story, I so do like a story with happy ending! Or at least hopeful:) Tanks for sharing!
| Cuccusstte chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Your wonderful story has been translated in Italian and now I have chenged the url . This is the new url :
| MoroTheWolfGod chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
| Quietus chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
This was increadable this was absolutly wonderful now I'm going to go read your other stuff. I just know I'm going to love them.
| Meta Capricorn chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
That was a great story!
I nearly cired, too, when Snape said :"Let me die. Please, let me die." It was so desperated for me.
I don't know what to say anymore.
ps: Please don't mind the odds and errors I may have written in tihs because I'm no native english speaker!
| salzgurke chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Oh what a nice story :-)... I liked the optimism in it and that you actually let Severus show emotions. No one - not even him - would stay cold in a situation like this... at least in my opinion. Very sensitive, this one, I truly enjoed it.
I'll add it to C2 for Snape Shortfics, thanks a lot for sharing! :-)
| samson chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
You've got snape and ron spot on, lovely little story.
| Flamingteen chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
| Nita chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
That was a really good story, and I enjoyed it. Then again, Severus is my favorite character. So, maybe that's why I enjoyed it.
| Oya chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Great read. I especially liked the part where Harry encouraged Severus to live on. Nice.
| Kathryn chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
Very well written. Snape was a bit emotional for my tastes, but the interaction with the others (especially Harry and Ron) was spot on.
I enjoyed reading this.
| Joots chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
Wow. i really loved how you portrayed everyone, and your writing was amazing. thank you for sharing the story
| Purple Artichokes from Mars chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Excellent work. This is and will always be one of my favorite pieces of fanfic of all time. (I admit, I've gone so far as to print it out and frame it in my room ::blushes:: )
| Cuccuss chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
It is an excellent short story. Charlie's past is wonderful. The atmosphere is perfect, dark but not so desperate - I think Rowling's world is quite optimistic: the Good is stronger than Evil, but a war would have casualities.
So you respect all the characters for what Rowling had written. Ron is compassionate but he is uneasy with Snape's body and greasy hair !
I was worried of slash when Ron takes off Snape's clothes without magic and they exchange a look... and the black silk boxer (Wow, the silk black boxers are very sexy...) but all finishes here. Ron is helping Snape,as a good person must do!
Snape crying is strange but non impossible. sometimes I imagine Snape as a more bitter Philip Marlowe, and I'd like writing stories with a dark atmosphere like in Chandler's novels. Snape is vulnerable, ok. He's not a superhero, he's a clevere man with enourmous magical skill, and I love him so! He's best Rowling character, despite younger Harry wizard.
I have an Anglo Italian Fanfiction site .it/fanfictions/
and I'd like translate your story and put it in the site, with a link to your page. I don't want steal your work !
Thank you for dreaming of fantasy !
| rutupatel chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
that was nice
i like seeing such a piece once in a while
keep it up