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This was supposed to be a one shot? Damn. That's the nature of the beast sometimes. How many more chapters are there? Not gonna lie, the title thing sounds really confusing and odd. Whatever works...I guess.

Anyways, the interaction in this was good. Though I admit, them keeping their adventures a secret is gonna bite them in the ass. When you keep things that long, they tend to blow up. I don't see their parents being pissed they got into dangerous situations unless they seeked them out - they would be more angry they lied to them for so long. That could be just my family too.

Also, what GF fics you want to write after this? And what are your favourite pairings in this fandom?

HGNNHH.

This was an excellent chapter, but literally everything inside me is screaming at them to tell their parents! Something tells me that parents who have raised twins as awesome as Dipper and Mabel and make lasagna for complete strangers can't be all bad!

Anyway, I realize that this story may never go there. Which means now we get to see how the twins continue to deal with life now that they have slightly more perplexed parents and have to deal with Post-Soos Depression.

Your writing style is clean and easy to follow. You don't dwell on things that are unnecessary and you keep the action moving. The ending of this chapter seems to imply a change in 'arc' so-to-speak, so I am interested to see where the story will go from here.

This os a really amazing and compeling fanfic of one of the best animations by disney. I must say, ive only read the first chapter and im hooked(somthing many writers of today cant do to readers). And thats saying a lot cause i mostly dislike fanfics so much i dont bother to coment on them. Keep up the good work as i read the rest of the story and get some people hooked on it too. :)

why is there some kind of large, hairless gopher hanging out with my kids? I bet that's what Dipper and Mabel's parents have been thinking as soon as they met him xD

loved this little diddy, twas adorable while soos lasted ;-;

Interacting read. Technically he did fight more then 2 ghosts but the first time wasn't that bad. Can't say about the parents , dident see them much in the show but pretty good job on them. Hope you continue.

The friggin' best fanfic on this whole god dang website! Somebody give this Dude/ Dudette an Oscar!

LOL-Loved it:)

yknow, I like to think that Stan had had the foresight to copy Journal as well, like he did with 3. honestly, it wouldn't make that much sense if he hadn't. he had had all three Journals for a good time before they were destroyed, after all - the first one for years and years, and the copying machine looks just as old, if not older.

anyway, neato chapter! it's amazing how Soos drove all that way to see Dipper and Mabel. he'd definitely do that. d'awww 3

hey new to your story and i'm tagging along

i love it pls uptead it faster

this... is a real in-depth chapter that makes you think twice of your life. :o man, if only we peeps in real life were as lucky as these two at the age of technically-a-teenager.

That was a very sweet chapter portraying their conflicted feelings between what they had known, lived, and loved all their life and their new sense of belonging to Gravity Falls.

I commend you for ability to fluidly and believably portray such complex and nuanced emotions as presented here.

I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Deep psychological moment:)

Ahhhhhs:)