Reviews for The Girl of Tomorrow
marius1117 chapter 37 . 11/17
Mecharic chapter 37 . 11/17
An acceptable end, even if I wish we'd gotten the whole thing proper... I loved the story overall. :)
Seraphy64 chapter 37 . 11/7
God damn was this good.
JohnyXD chapter 21 . 10/17
"Alright, alright, alright. From henceforth, we're all to be known as Team Alpha Super Awesome Cool Dynamite Wolf Squadron."
A cookie to anyone who remembers this. :D
JohnyXD chapter 17 . 10/17
Huh... I guess you were a bit more literal than I thought.
d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 37 . 10/4
While I would've loved to have a complete story, this is satisfactory. I understand writer's burnout all too well. Will follow up with any other stories you post! Stay safe!
d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 22 . 9/27
Armsy's gonna be batsy!
d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 19 . 9/27
yup I butchered his name...
d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 8 . 9/27
Choco!? This is most definitely Jo'nn J'ohnns! (probably misspelled that)
d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 4 . 9/27
Jones is Martian Manhunter isn't he?
d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 4 . 9/27
Brainiac? that either means good news or dead news...
twilliams1797 chapter 8 . 8/6
In ch8 you have Cricket alive but in a previous CH she is killed by Lung
RSegovia chapter 37 . 8/4
Really amazing and even inspiring story! I honestly shed tears a few times. The epilogue was definitely confusing and I still don't really understand what happened, exactly. But I still love it! Thanks for taking the effort to share your writing.
NyxSky chapter 17 . 7/30
setan means "ghost'
and demon in indonesia is "iblis"
feauxen chapter 37 . 5/29
I have to say, I'm not really a Superman fan, so I didn't know any of the lore. But this story is still amazing, and now I think I get why Superman is still such a popular superhero after all these years, despite practically being the original Gary Stu. Or at least, the character that most people would assume is the original Gary Stu.

As for the last chapter...I think you did well. Yes, a more fleshed out finish would have been nice, but this one was still everything it needed to be and more, so I really can't complain. Good job!
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