Reviews for the first jinrou
The DarkCat chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
Alright, that was interesting, I liked how everything everted in the ending, making it nearly an ideal Sotoba,that was so sweet. Making Abel and Cain's story cliser to Shiki was a good idea, and something different! Oh, and I think it's Seishin not Seshin... And try to capitalize letters when inside dialogue clauses. Anyway besides the mistakes, this was a cool one shot.
qNrxF chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
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lUqmm chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
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