Reviews for Finally |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It’s a shame that this seems to have been dropped, it was such a fun read and was starting to get interesting along the way. Very few people write Naru/Tsuna fics and even then most of them are just smut (not that I can really blame them I guess)... hopefully you return at some point to continue but it’s been close to 3 years so I’m assuming you won’t, best of luck with whatever you are up to now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read at most 5 good naruTsu fics that were not Smut/Harem fics and this is by far one of the best thanks for your time in making this and I look forward to future updates of you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I am speachless with your fanfic. The use of the vocabulary, the statement of the sotry, the use of the metaphor and the use of the similes, everything is perfect in this story. I hope you will continue writing this fanfic, because it's well developed and has a whole more to write. Good job, and good luck! PD: I love your soft lemon, in other fanfic i've noticed that everybody uses the lemon mechanized, as position 1, position 2, position 3, climax. When the escence of the lemon is to transmite a feeling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Being honest for my Tsunade if I felt something for Naruto in the canon, but it is true the problem of age separates them PD: I never saw Tsunade with Jiraiya or another person, I always saw him with Naruto I think there is a lot of chemistry between them and they would be the best anime couple |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is realy genualy fantastic. There where a few moments that made me realy conect with the charecters. I will definatly keep an eye out for more of your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please update this. Please don't abandon it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I hope you feel up or have inspiration to write more chapters in the future! |
![]() ![]() this is amazing you should update pls |
![]() ![]() this is one of the best stories i ever read you should continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() your writing is amazing,this story is great you should really update this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story Tastefully done without being smut look for to a sequel if you can do one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I really wish you would continue this. This is one of the most stable fics about Baa Chan and Naruto that I've read on this site |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just say, I absolutely love the idea of this story and I love the way you write it even more |