Never did I think that I would actually favourite a Nar/Tsu fic. The reason being is the problem you have already addressed, about Tsunade being immediately sexually interested in Naruto. I always found it poorly executed and - in a simple way - childish.

I am absolutely glad to have found this fic, because it's made my day. For one, I now know that there's a story about this pairing that has been decently written. Every interaction, every description, led to that fateful encounter they had. It was a pleasure to read - to see it come undone. Like I said before, this wasn't like those other fictions which depicted Tsunade as some sort of "sexual predator". And I applaud you for that.

I also laugh at the fact that despite this being a Naru/Tsu, this isn't as popular as those hentei one-shots of them. It goes to show that good fic like this is often overlooked for some cheap porn one-shot. It's just a damn shame that people miss out on good fiction like this.

I'm ranting... sorry. Hahaha.
In a nutshell: I want to congratulate you for writing the BEST Naru/Tsu fanfic I've ever read. It was a beautiful piece.

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that right bro i also loves naru x tsunade 's fanfics keep it up next chap u should right the problem they faces

Hope you write more, much more.

Amazing and a lot better than what I've ridden about this paring so good job and please make one with more chapters

Great One-shot. I would like to read more of tsu and naru. Hope to see more in the future even with others.

Awesome

I must say that was beautifully written loved every bit of it and if you do decide to expand on it I would read every single chapter

that was amazing let me tell you I loved this story it was really really good I loved it

Ok now this was good I've always loved me some Naruto x Tsunade it's like a guilty pleasure of mine lol great work

Man i love this pairing i hope you will write about this pairing again..

Because it's you, it'd be amazing to see more of this done. However, I can't deny I kept dreading the moment she revealed her true form.

Based on the anime, she should look decrepit. And no matter how pure Naruto's love it seems creepy.

I loved her character most of the time as well, except where there were similarities drawn between her and Sakura.

Regardless of what you decide to do, this was a great one-shot.

I kinda want you to make maybe one more chapter, I feel like making it a whole story would take away from the plot. But leaving it as it is kinda feels like it's unfinished. If that makes sense, or you could ask someone else to finish it. Not sure, it was a really great one shot though, I'm not much of one shots to be honest, because they always make me want more. xD