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VivianaMerzhin chapter 51 . 7/18
Christian really turned Ana into a soppy milquetoast. Her driven spirit was squashed like a dead bug on a windshield.
Krooela chapter 24 . 7/1
Is it me or does anyone else get sick of Christian''s shit? Everything having to be his way, no regards for anyone elses feelings or their opinion? Ana needs to kick him in the balls as hard as she can. His insecurity and controling personality is getting really old really fast..grow up asshole..the world doesn't revolve around you and your money...
limtse1978 chapter 1 . 6/2
This goes down as one of my absolute favorite fifty shades- fanfic I’ve read thus far!
JC Tryon chapter 51 . 5/30
ST2, this is just delightful. Intricate character development as you move them through your story. Specifically, I was totally impressed with the Couples Counseling with Flynn, in Chapter 39. You really get into their *reasoning* [not just their actions] about ways they deal with things… especially Ana.
ELJ and most ff.n authors don't touch on that.

So, I really enjoyed it and on to TCB which should be another doozie. Thank you for your writings.

PS Early on, in the elevator when AS calls the unknown 'Mr Grey an asshole and CG says, "Christian Grey, Head Asshole. Pleasure to meet you," he says to me with a straight face. Wonderful!
Guest chapter 45 . 3/8
Ana is a whiney pita, BUT I love Anastasia Unplugged! Love Christian period.
degfas chapter 12 . 2/26
I’m so glad that you explained the arrest warrant. I thought the story was going in a totally different direction after that. Nice to know it was just a figure of speech.
AngelDemon12 chapter 40 . 1/31
About time!D
AngelDemon12 chapter 38 . 1/31
Oh my gosh! Christian needs to be slapped. hard! the whole time I've been reading, most of it, I have been wanting to slap Grey upside the head or across the face. I don't agree with some reviews that say Ana is acting like a spoiled brat... that applies to Christian for always wanting his way and practically forcing Ana to to bend to his will. Ana needs to slap him. twice at least.

LOVE THIS STORY!
Guest chapter 38 . 1/28
Ok I have been reading all chapters up this one and to me Ana seems like a spoil brat and love to make a mountain out of a mole hill...
CTHEWOODS chapter 25 . 12/22/2017
I personally like the fact that Ana wants a solid rep before they go public...she wants her reputation to speak for itself...I think THAT is a sign of maturity in itself from her. That's why I think she should stay at GEH as his right hand or Ros's for that matter ...or take over the publishing Dept...she's already proven she could do it...so I don't think she should let what others think dictate her decision to stay at whatever she wants to do at GEH. I'd like to see them work together...she's good for Grey at GEH and if she'd allow herself to see it without worrying about what others think of her, it would be a great opportunity for someone as young as she is to make a name for HERSELF. Even Publishing under the GEH umbrella would be more profitable than the Salon business, so it shouldn't be something for her to turn her nose up at. Loving the jealousy over Nicky. Reading on...
CTHEWOODS chapter 19 . 12/21/2017
Kate...always the bitch...jealous of her best friend actually liking someone else. I know Ana has a mind of her own ...I really don't think Grey is malicious in his intent to be with her...he just needs to learn to share...and play well with others...lol. He's just afraid of losing her and not being worthy of her affection. He'll learn...the hard way, I'm sure. Then maybe Kate will finally be happy that Ana is heartbroken. Reading on...
CTHEWOODS chapter 17 . 12/21/2017
I LOVE she's getting away from Kate...lol. I really don't like her in ANY story...even James'...she a snoopy, more-controlling-than-Grey, jealous of Ana bitch. It's like she's doesn't want her to do anything with him because it takes Ana away from her...unless Kate chooses to go blow Ana off to go screw whoever. Never thought that was fair of her. I can understand a friend looking out for another but not to the point where she makes you uncomfortable or feel pressured. And it seems that's all Kate does.

As you can tell I'm always team Christian and I feel sorry for him mostly being the poor guy who doesn't have a clue how to show someone that he loves them...totally believing he's not worth having any. And that is just sad. And we all know he does love her, even if he doesn't know it and doesn't have a clue how to show her or keep her. I love how you write him in your story...it's funny and frustrating at the same time...and that takes talent! Reading on...
CTHEWOODS chapter 14 . 12/20/2017
I don't understand HIS PROBLEM ! I mean get the fuck over it OR at least talk to her! Cowboy up and at least give her the truth! You did have me cracking up with him showing up everywhere on her dates...and I will say Ana has the patience of Job because after the second time, I know I just couldn't sit at work the next day and not explode! Really enjoying your story..going back and forth between Ana's and Christian's POVs. REALLY REALLY ready for that lemon...starting to get really frustrated over it...so I can totally "feel" theirs! Reading on...
CTHEWOODS chapter 5 . 12/19/2017
Am reading both your POV's simultaneously and am liking it immensely! I haven't decided about this Gunther guy...she should ditch him on his name alone...lol...but is he after her or just a jealous toad and trying to get info out of her? Is he going to be pissed/jealous when she turns him down? He just is sort of aggravating...always butting into her business...sort of like Kate in most stories, but this is on a work level. Anyway...enjoying it so far. Finding the interviews interesting. Reading on...;)
Guest chapter 51 . 11/27/2017
Great story ! Loved every minute !
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