Now after reading this masterpiece I am dying to read the sequel this story is my favorite, thank you sooo much author for writing this amazing piece of art.

For a hot second I thought Magma Bitch dissolved Ace’s neck-

I know it's been years since this fanfic was posted, but I have to say this was totally awesome and very much well worth the read!

Wonderful story!

Endlessblankpages, I would like to ask for your permission to translate this story into Vietnamese and post it on wattpad, I also have a nick and am the author of two fanfics hp and apocalypse passionately written by myself, I really like it this series should want to translate it.

Garp has to be dead or something. I hope you realize Goa Kingdom is Garp's home. Unless Sengoku himself gave an order to wipe out Goa, there's simply no way it could happen.

This, this, THIS! THIS IS EVERYTHING! Forget about Oda’s fanfic this is canon for me now idc what others are gonna say TT Thank you for writing and sharing this absolute masterpiece! You are AMAZING!

"You know… moo! Like a cow's opinion. It doesn't matter." Luffy replied, nodding and looking quite pleased with himself. "It's moo!"

love that this is Joey Tribianni's reference? :D

Excellent story

Sabo is in contact with the revolutionaries? This is getting interesting!

Loving it so far!

they yeeted him

This fanfic is honestly amazing, the best ASLWhitebeards I've read so far. It was so well written, no joke! Even with some the characters having slight differences to the anime/manga, putting your own spin on it, it didn't feel out of place or too far the characters true nature. Last chapter actually had me tearing up, which has never happen to me with a fanfic before. Loved the fact that you actually put some focus on Sabo. A lot of the ASL's I've read tend to neglect him in terms of prominence in the story compared to Ace and Luffy. Big props to the author 3

Amazing

Good story

Tho really, i dislike how the whitebeards didnt even apologize for attacking the ASL