Reviews for To Build A Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "You know… moo! Like a cow's opinion. It doesn't matter." Luffy replied, nodding and looking quite pleased with himself. "It's moo!" love that this is Joey Tribianni's reference? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story |
![]() ![]() Sabo is in contact with the revolutionaries? This is getting interesting! |
![]() ![]() Loving it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() they yeeted him |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfic is honestly amazing, the best ASLWhitebeards I've read so far. It was so well written, no joke! Even with some the characters having slight differences to the anime/manga, putting your own spin on it, it didn't feel out of place or too far the characters true nature. Last chapter actually had me tearing up, which has never happen to me with a fanfic before. Loved the fact that you actually put some focus on Sabo. A lot of the ASL's I've read tend to neglect him in terms of prominence in the story compared to Ace and Luffy. Big props to the author 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing |
![]() ![]() Good story Tho really, i dislike how the whitebeards didnt even apologize for attacking the ASL |
![]() ![]() ![]() No doubt one of the best WB ASL fanfiction of all time most definitely would recommend |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was easily the best ASK story I have ever read and really want to know if you plan a sequel following Luffys journey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 10. Oh my gosh at the end haru! I can't drop laughing! XD so intense momentand he just fall and slowly walk towards the asl pirates with aw. Aw aw aw. Tip toe I can't! XD he's my favourite so far! Chapter 23 Wow... Sabo... Very manipulative... I love it!, IS like Sabo saying "the world turn against us... Why wouldn't we do the same?" I'm proud baby I'm proud!. Thinking this through the most dangerous of the brothers is sabo case close! Chapter 24 When ace called whitbeard pops for the first time. I crumble and cried it such a heartwarming scene! TvT Chapter 26 Oh? Are you Implying a future marco x ace? (insert lenny face) Chapter 27. I...i cried... I love that Ace forgive but not actually forgive Roger but... Settle the rage inside of him. I love how you played that. I love also how you made Sabo manipulative! XD. Thank you for making such a good one piece book |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a cool set up! Bam Bam is Cipher Pol! That's so cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely incredible! This is such a cool and interesting fight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's so awesome! They're so cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit. Oh no! |