Reviews for Escape
Panjason chapter 28 . 10/19
I enjoyed this but I get the feeling I missed quite a few bits since I am a conventional White/Japanese guy. Oh well.
I feel like this had much more believability compared to A drop of poison even if having Kushina persist within the seal seems a little hard to swallow. Souls obviously exist and the Kyuubi should be harder to seal I suppose.
Thanks. Maybe I’ll try out more of your works.
troutman30 chapter 18 . 10/19
One more time, all of Hinata's family have a blind spot, they do not see 360 degrees, read the Sasuke Retrieval Arc, Negi's battle with Kidomaru.
Hannah0597 chapter 28 . 10/13
This is really good! I enjoyed this one from beginning to end.

Your story is the most realistic Naruto as a (part time) girl stories I have read where he isn't trans. I would say your Naruto is more genderfluid than anything else. I like how it came up in a natural way, as a way to learn from and enjoy doing things with his mother at first, and then later on as a way to just escape being Naruto. I have read some where it just comes up for no reason in particular other than the author wanted it that way. It always comes off as a bit forced, and you managed to avoid that very well.

I think I do agree that the whole multiple personality thing probably isn't the healthiest thing in the world, but Naruto makes it work quite well, so all the more power to them I guess.

I think one of the best things for me is that nobody makes a huge deal of the whole gender thing. Yeah, some people might think its a bit weird, but they just accept it and move on, such as Karin.

I am not very good at the whole review thing, but I enjoyed this one enough to comment. I also really don't get the people who review almost every chapter of the story just to complain about the gender thing. I mean that was the whole point of the story! Just don't read it if you don't like that kind of thing, no reason to leave bad reviews because you don't like one of the main plot points.

Hope to see more from you in the future!
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 28 . 7/25
He became Hokage under his female persona? Ugh. Awful ending.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 26 . 7/25
Gender obsession:
Tsunami smiled and gestured to her clone. "And this is Uzumaki Menma, another 'cousin.' He's actually my relief valve for when the estrogen gets too much and I need some boy time to recover." She smiled to let them know she was joking—mostly.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 23 . 7/25
Chapter 23…just another chapter obsessed with gender. Example:
"She reminded me that you had never gawked at us; told me that when you were girl-you, you were a girl completely including that your cycle wasn't faked and that you could get pregnant; and most importantly, she reminded me what you had almost sacrificed for me." She shrugged. "I decided it wasn't worth losing one of my best friends over."
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 21 . 7/25
Every chapter of this story mentions gender. Is there something wrong with the author? It’s like you have an agenda.
Another example from chapter 21:
"I am a truly exceptional sensor," Karin said proudly. "Now tell me what's going on. Are you really a boy or a girl?"

"I was born a boy," Tsunami admitted. "Naruto is my real name. I stumbled upon my transformation bloodline several years ago and decided to use it to escape the stigma of being me part time."

"You mean where they treat you like the Kyuubi?" she asked.

Tsunami nodded.

"Does your transformation bloodline make you a real girl?" Karin asked.

Tsunami nodded again. "Monthlies and all. The medic nin think I can even get pregnant." She shuddered. While at times she wanted to be a mother—she blamed her hormones—the fact was that she was still the Kyuubi jinchuuriki, as far as she knew, meant that she would never allow herself to risk releasing it due to pregnancy. This was besides the fact that she could not see herself letting anyone put anything in there. Being able to mother the children she fathered would have to satisfy her mothering instinct.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 20 . 7/25
This fic is OBSESSED with gender. It constantly mentions if. What is wrong with the author?
Another example:
He wondered how this affected him. He was mostly the same in either of his standard bodies, but hormones did have an effect. As a boy, it was a little easier to lose control of his emotions and he lost like his temper a little more easily, but as a girl, her emotions persisted longer and it was a little bit harder to regain control of her temper once she lost it. Of course, this rule of thumb did not apply as well around the time when she was menstruating. He considered himself lucky that she did not menstruate as frequently as other girls because of time spent as a boy. He thought that switching back and forth, might make the effects of his hormones on his emotions were more obvious to him than they were to most people. Sometimes he missed his pre-puberty days when his emotions were simpler to control. He shuddered as he thought that it would only get worse; he was only twelve.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 13 . 7/25
This story just keeps getting grosser and grosser…

The other reason is that she had decided that she could not risk getting pregnant so that what happened to her mother could not happen to her. The decision left her with an odd pang of regret. Before the talk with Sasuke, she had purposely avoided thinking about sex since her mother had given her the talk when she turned ten. Now the thought of having sex as a girl filled her with a sense of vulnerability and disgust (and, if she were honest with herself, a small amount of curiosity), but somehow the thought of not carrying a baby inside her left her strangely empty and lacking.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 9 . 7/25
Kurenai let them go, Naruto returned to her apartment and then changed into her original form. He had a meeting with the Hokage and the ANBU quartermaster.

CRINGE. This gender bender shit is ruining the story. I’m sick of it. Mentioning his period and using female gender pronouns is revolting.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 8 . 7/25
Her team was announced next. "Team Eight: Haruno Sakura, Hyuuga Hinata, and Uzumaki Tsunami.”

They would NEVER make an all female team. This is even stated in canon. The team doesn’t even make sense.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 7 . 7/25
His mom snickered. "You know this means it's likely you can get pregnant, don't you?"

He blanched.

"I will tell you something that has saved a few high-level Konoha kunoichi when they ran out of certain supplies," she said.


"Shadow Clones don't bleed during their periods," she said.

"They don't!" he said.

"They still feel bloated and crampy, but they don't bleed," she said.

Naruto thought about using Shadow Clones for Tsunami during the days that Tsunami had her period.

"I know what you're thinking," his mom said, "but remember your deal with the Third. No cheating!"

He pouted.

His mom hugged him. "It'll be okay. Half the world deals with it. You can too."

When he left his mindscape, he sent a Shadow Clone for feminine hygiene supplies. While he was waiting, he had an evil thought. There was no way he was going to the Academy today anyway. . .
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 6 . 7/25
This story is getting ridiculous. So fucking stupid. Look at this:

"Mom!" he yelled, running into the house.

"What is it, Naruto-chan?" she said. "Shouldn't you be going to school?"

"I'm bleeding from my private parts!" he yelled.

"What?" she said, surprised. "Right now?"

"No, as Tsunami!" he responded.

She relaxed. "Ah, that's normal for a girl, although I'm surprised you're going through it."
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 5 . 7/25
"Don't judge Jiraiya too harshly, Naruto-kun," the Hokage stated. "I asked him to stay away until you became an official shinobi in order to not draw attention to the fact that you look an awful lot like your father."

Ummm couldn’t Jiraiya use a disguise or a henge? How does a spymaster not figure out a way to discreetly meet his godson? This reasoning is beyond stupid.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 4 . 7/25
So bizarre and unhealthy for him to develop a female persona with the mother approving it. It makes me question the author. Are you trans?
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