I am sorry that you lost the muse for this story. I say that because of the time skip that you did. I wish that you could have continue this story for much longer than what you actually did. But I still thank you for adding this story to this site I have truly enjoyed it.

Again I will give you your props for writing Sasuke in a much better light then he was ever given. But it is not enough to make me a fan of him. But congrats on being the one that has help me see him in a much better light.

I respect your reasoning here. And I don’t fault you for it. But I personally don’t like the pairing because it has been over done, and I also don’t like it because I am not a fan of Sasuke. I personally don’t like showering him with so many gifts and other things that he got. I also see him as a traitor so there is no way that I could support such a pairing. But this has been a wonderful story thank you for adding it.

This prologue is short you are correct. However it is not the shortest one that I have ever read. So I personally want to say this to you. “Thank you, seriously thank you for being considerate to your readers and showing that a good author can acknowledged that the right length matters.

I really liked this story. I read it all in 3 days. I wish there was more, but at least it didn't suffer from not being finished like a lot of other stories I read. Thanks a bunch!

It is a very nice story but i slacked of when the naruto persona died that was a bit sad if i were you i wouldnt have done but all for all nice story

very interesting story that started out pretty strong, but seemed to lose its steam in the closing half and stretches for some reason.

ok, what with the "koi"? it's definitely not "love", so the only relevant one is "come here"? but that is so weird to use to your own lover, that is used when a boss is "ordering" their underlings.
So either they're looking down on their partner, or there's some other meaning i don't know

Great story and well written.

9/10

My only complaint is the story felt it progressed a little too fast, especially at the end of the Tsunade Retrieval mission. It also skipped alot of good filler that could've helped flesh out the story better. I do appreciate that you gave brief snippets to show how the story went afterwards though, not many authors do that and just stop writing all together.

I hate that Kurama was destroyed before he even got a chance. I got a soft spot for him because he fits in my personal category of "misunderstood monster that just needs a friend". That and he becomes one of Naruto's greatest allies and friends in Canon and it just doesn't sit right with me that he got destroyed like he did. It would've been different if you had portrayed him as a truly evil and malevolent being though.

Anyway back on track, great story and well written, just not my cup of tea. 9/10 rating for effort and good story line. An extra 0.5 for at least finishing it up with snippets instead of dropping off entirely.

Total rating: 9.5/10

Very Well Done. Keep it up.

Absolutely loved this fic. Would have loved to see it further into Shipudden but can see why you ended it like this. Also like that your epilogue properly tied off all the loose ends.

She should really learn to use the chakra

Also is Karen the romantic option? And if so will she also like girl naruto (I can’t remember her name which is why I’m using naruto)
Or just naruto?

That’s dumb? He’s whole thing was to be hidden, but now he’s revealing himself and let them live, very out of character

Naruto is aware what being gay is? Why is uncomfortable dating girls as a girl? Also is naruto bi?

That’s quite the ability

Gender-fluid naruto, I love it

Also wouldn’t kushina technically be more powerful than naruto? I mean she had the full kyuubi, didn’t have her education ruined, the only difference would be naruto making friends with kurama