Reviews for Escape
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 4 . 7/25/2021
So bizarre and unhealthy for him to develop a female persona with the mother approving it. It makes me question the author. Are you trans?
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 2 . 7/25/2021
"The other very useful thing you can do with good-enough chakra control is to manifest a temporary seal with your chakra.

False. The standard is permanent. Minato put his Hiraishin on Obito and 16 years later, it was still on his body.
Sourai-ken chapter 28 . 6/23/2021
Great work! Not quite sure about the destroying of the Kyuubi considering canon material, but if you want to take liberties on what exactly comprises the existence of the Bijuu I suppose you could go that route. Regardless, excellently structured and well-written - looking forward to reading more fics!
BlazeStryker chapter 22 . 5/18/2021
The Green Beasts of Konoha, ladles and gentiemen, able to drive people apesh!t just by being themselves.
BlazeStryker chapter 3 . 5/18/2021
I always figured the physical change is an enhanced version, as Shadow Clones are massively costly but far enhanced clones. As Naruto is known to have mastered Shadow Clones first go it likely sank in that high-powered variants of jutsu are actually easier for him.
BlazeStryker chapter 1 . 5/18/2021
Something that's always bothered me about this; If sealing the Kyuubi within oneself then dying just releases it in three years, doesn't that mean Minato's half will be likewise released in nine? (Three years because it's a disembodiment of a Bijuu, three since it's only half of Kyuubi, and three more as it has to heartburn its way out of the Shinigami's gut)
4fundaore chapter 28 . 5/12/2021
ImaginarySora chapter 28 . 5/11/2021
If you think about it her henge or female form would be the one carved into the Hokage Mountain lol. Its also interesting since Konoha now has 2 consecutive female Hokages(presumably since they dont know her true gender.)
thtadthtshldntb chapter 28 . 5/5/2021
Wow what an amazing story. You really did a great job with the dual sexes and avoided creepy territory.

My only real criticism could be i would have liked to see a bit more epilogue. Like one for each character so we could briefly get an idea of how their substories turned out.
Tzarista chapter 28 . 4/11/2021
Thank you for the story. Very well written, flows well, believable
I loved it
bigrobinho chapter 28 . 4/10/2021
Enjoyed this greatly, found the genderbending hiding premise quite interesting, and appreciated the development of the interactions between teammates etc.
Going to explore your other works now.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 27 . 3/16/2021
Absolutely love how you write Sasuke. It's what I wish Kishimoto did with his character instead of making him a shallow edgelord. Still keep the revenge and edge, but with more depth and real person-ness.
MacMan3679 chapter 6 . 3/3/2021
This raises an interesting question, what will be your protagonist's sexual preference? As either gender, will they both be het, homo, bi, or combinations of the three?
MacMan3679 chapter 5 . 3/3/2021
I think another requirement, should've been for Naruto to learn a taijutsu style, to compliment his body type, and male physique. That way, he could continue to develop alongside Tsunami, and if he has two elemental affinities, Tsunami and Naruto, will learn them separately.
Mari Wollsch chapter 28 . 2/24/2021
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