I am truly loving this story. thank you for writing. I am sorry for not reviewing every chapter, but it's so hard to pause when you just want to get to the next scene.

I really liked v the Story but who was the large figure that interrupted Edward? you jumped from them reuniting to their wedding you left us with a cliffhanger in chapter 21 2nd didn't answer said cliffhanger in chapter 22.

Seems the next chapter takes place after whatever large looming figure did?!

I spent my weekend reading this entire fic and I absolutely love it..

Really enjoyed this! You have talent.

So I’m guessing your a Rhysand fan?

Thank you.

Given how much of that other story that you continually said you used (often stating parts were word for word), you should have designated this a crossover between the two, instead of making it categorized as Twilight only. It's somewhat misleading to readers. It also was disruptive to constantly point it out in your A/N's but not classify it as a crossover. You were giving copyright credit to both. I could never get my mind to fully accept it as a Twilight story, which is what I wanted to read.

Your writing style gave the story great potential. You definitely have talent. There are still quite a few grammatical and spelling errors, considering it is beta'd. Though, since my job includes editing, I tend to be a tough critic about those things.

Regardless, thank you for sharing your story with the public. Even though this critique may seem more critical than positive, I look forward to reading more of your Twific stories.

Loved this story! So vivid in detail and just a great read!

Loved your story. Thanks.

Lovely! I read the whole story straight through I couldn't put it down! Thank you!

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Holy moly!

Yess! Kiss her!

Awesome story!