|Reviews for The Echotrance Trilogy|
| DarkDeki chapter 3 . 2/20/2004
Heya, I have this image of having read this before... Deja Vuish. Is it in Wings? Or did you rewrite this? Ah, well it's better than I remembered which is great!
Your writing style has always been pleasant and the action moves swiftly. Nice job!
Just one problem, it's kind of hard remembering the different kinds of new pokemon, is there some kind of neo-pokedex for your new pokemon?
shodekiagari ( .com)
| Miroku004 chapter 3 . 11/8/2003
You made a couple errors. did you mean Velociraptor when you said Velourraptor? And that's not how you spell Ka Me Ha Me Hah. It sounds like it, but it isn't. This was a great fic, but sad. MewTwo is Mew's mate? O.o Wouldn't that be inbreeding, since MewTwo is her clone? _ I have a MewTwo! He owns. Well, it's too bad you died. Oh, well. Seeya!
| Miroku004 chapter 2 . 11/8/2003
...This is really sad...my MewTwo could whup any freakin' MewThree!
| Miroku004 chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
Cliffhangerness...*watching Ash almost get pegged with a Shadow Ball on Poke'mon:The First Movie* LEARN HOW TO FRIKKIN' AIM MEWTWO!
| Angel Angamaite chapter 3 . 10/13/2003
I... don't know what to say...
I just... don't...
I can't stand to not find out what happens...
| Obsidian Blade chapter 3 . 8/31/2003
God, that was great. I've got tears in my eyes now, all their deaths... They worked so hard. This is an amazingly angsty fic, even more than I realised at first. And now I want more. That is SUCH a cliffhanger! I need more! UPDATE DAMN IT!
| Obsidian Blade chapter 2 . 8/30/2003
That. Was amazing. Full of tragedy and violence and fear and... Woah. VERY good. And the 'lost all for the want of a horsehoe nail' rhyme was a perfect ending. It tied up the whole battle really well. Great chapter!
| Obsidian Blade chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
NOT MUCH OF A BEGINNING? WHAT... What are you on about? That was amazing. Absolutely amazing. I.. I... I'm speachless. Good grief, ya sure know how to write. I hope I can write like this one day, it's just great. Should have more reviews. Should have WAY MORE reviews. OMG, it's perfect. Description, action, emotion... Kaioh-sama, this is the best Pokemon fic I've read. I suddenly feel as if all those other fics I've reviewed weren't worthy. Heck, I ain't worthy compared to this ::grabs fic in sudden realisation:: It... I... wow. The only fic I wrote I was proud of has been defeated. I bow to you, oh authory one. I must read more though, before I explode complimenting you. Looks like I'm going to have to do that tommorrow though, stupid mother and her stupid boyfriend! ::grumble grumble::
~A very impressed Blade-chan!
| DarkDeki chapter 3 . 4/24/2003
...Breathe in...Breathe out...Breath.. oh forget it! WHAT HAPPENS? Tell ME TELL ME! erm yeah sorry about that I just really want to know what the heck happens.
The final chapter was great. Marc the mankey made me crack up. I loved that part.
It got a bit confusing with Suma though (was she dead, then alive, and then dead again?) And all these new characters got my poor head spinning.
But nonetheless, you've written a truly great pokefic. Oh, by the way. You better tell me what happened...
| Poison Dusk chapter 2 . 4/21/2003
Wow! Violence, action, adventure, death, tradgedy, this is great stuff! Please update soon.
Just a couple of minor mistakes: you said Topaz inhaled a sandwich and as far as I know, breathing in sandwiches is a little impossible. You also said the Talorn used Aeroblast, now I'm probably wrong, but I thought only Lugia could learn this move.
Really cool story though, is it a continuation from the Wings of Council story?
| Angel Ishtar chapter 2 . 4/12/2003
AI:GR U BETTER UPDATE DAMNITT OR I'LL FLAME YOU MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
BAKURA:FOOLISH MORTAL YOU BETTER UPDATE NOW OR I'LL STEAL YOUR SOUL AND LOCK IT AWAY IN THE SHADOW REALM 4EVER
| raven chapter 1 . 4/12/2003
WHOHO GREEAT CHAPTER I'M REALLY HYPER TODAY CAN'T YOU TELL
| Pikajenn chapter 1 . 2/4/2003
I absolutely loved 'On the Wings of Council' and on a whim I checked in on your profile. I'm so glad I did! This is going to be a fantastic story to read. More soon, please!
| Morbane chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
Not much of a beginning? Are you *KIDDING*? And I'm not going to wait for an answer on that one.
Talk about an action sequence... (mostly action, anyway)