Reviews for Vahan: Possession is Nine Tenths
Fanfic Lover chapter 17 . 6/6
Aghhh it’s June now please update soon I’m going batty waiting for the next update!
nessiesmith2012 chapter 17 . 6/4
Love this story! I read this years ago and have been searching for it but couldnt find it till i just stumbled on and youve updated as well! Cant wait for new chapters
randomplotbunny chapter 17 . 5/31
This is an amazing story! I am so looking forward to reading more of it! :-D
annasfanfic chapter 17 . 5/30
&3
rytan451 chapter 17 . 5/29
I just binge-read your Vahan series. Though Vahan was ridiculously mature for his age, I suppose it was part of the premise of the story, and was eventually handwaved away. I can excuse that.

To be completely frank, I loved reading it. And, like many other things I enjoy reading, I've spent the time to write some constructive commentary on it. After all, a crumbling wall may have any dirt on it ignored, but an otherwise pristine mirror invites criticism for every scratch and mote of dust.

Your small children seem to swing between very realistic and completely unrealistic depending on the situation. The mercenaries that Vahan hired were unrealistically loyal, and his behaviour towards them could have driven them away.

But, like in my metaphor, your work is a mirror in comparison with a crumbling wall. Should you choose to spend some time on polishing and cleaning it, it shines like nothing else, but a crumbling wall may need to be demolished before reaching half the level of shine.

Good job. I send my well-wishes for your long-term health.
Stephanie MRV chapter 17 . 5/29
Oh wow. Poor Cedric
I feel for him
I cannot wait to see how fumbles reacts to the book idea
Lol
He will flip
Stephanie MRV chapter 16 . 5/29
Nooo. I feel like a chapter has been wasted. Noooo
Stephanie MRV chapter 15 . 5/29
Wow. Ok. I'm glad it was really incest
Still scared me though
Oh well
But wow
This is getting good
I cant wait for more
Stephanie MRV chapter 14 . 5/29
Incest!?are you kidding me

On a side note. Loved the Christmas fluff

But omg incest. I hope the 5th year had it wrong
Wow
Well now harry has something to exploit
Stephanie MRV chapter 13 . 5/29
Ohhhh. Things are getting interesting
I cant wait for more chapters
Stephanie MRV chapter 12 . 5/29
Buahahahaha
He keeps punishing the poor hat
That's awesome
I hope hermione grows up
Stephanie MRV chapter 11 . 5/29
Omg I hate James potter and Sirius black with a burning passion
I hope they burn in hell.
Oh please keep updating this story. It is too good to ignore
Stephanie MRV chapter 9 . 5/28
Ohhh. Harry is making so many allies
I hope not boy doesn't become a problem
I hope whatever Harry's father does is spectacular
Stephanie MRV chapter 7 . 5/28
Omg. Omg. Omg
I snorted at the last sentence.
My stomach hurts so bad from the hysterical laughter.
Oh I wish I could have seen that.
Thank you for that.
Lmfao
Ok. I am happy how things are going. And love Harry's revenge on Albert
I hope to see more soon
Stephanie MRV chapter 5 . 5/28
Ohhhh. I'm drooling over the tech.
This is fascinating
Yay. Keep up the good work
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