Reviews for Walking Dead Wizard |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Do another chapter of Harry's pregnancy and have Eric and Aaron reaction. Jessica and her boys too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely am loving this story! Thank you so much for writing it. I like seeing how Harry and the crew deal with the challenges they come across. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is a pretty good story, keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More Daryl and Harry and his pregnancy, plissssss! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yesshh! Update! Thank you for update! love your story by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great new chapter, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() starting the story again. As I wait for it to be finished. this is honestly one of my favorite top 3 stories. Not just in fanfiction but out all the stories I have ever read. I'm old and a readaholic so thats a heck of a lot of stories. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, i just hadnt caught up. Now I am on 120 and see the injury is acknowledged. Of course it is. You are awesome! Thank you for this story. It is one of my absolute favorites out of all of yours! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought Michone was hurt. Just asking, becasue you are amazing and i love your stories. I cant wait to read the rest of this. |
![]() ![]() me encanta que la nota dice "tres o cuatro capítulos más" Son 123 capitulos en total! Jajajaj |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this for the umpeenth time and loving it just the same every go around. This is honestly in my top 5 HP crossovers and massively number 1 in Walking dead/Harry Potter crossovers! I am wondering why Harry keeps giving the secret to people, rather than doing what he did with Abraham and Rosita - portkey them in, so if they leave, they wouldn't know the location? And as much as I love how caring Harry is, saving people, saving as much of the last of humanity as he can, it seems like he's turning softer, I mean, why in the heck would he allow these people (homophobic and if they were to learn, I'm sure they would also be against magic, some at least, that woman coming to mind, not to mention simply disrespectful including one who tried to attack him simply for his words) come in to his home, do all they've done, presume to take over easy as you like, and despite all this, Harry will still offer them the sanctuary of his magic? Even if it's among one of the other communities? I mean, I understand, give the people a chance to prove they're more than they've shown so far, give them a chance to grow, but ooh I really couldn't haha. I wouldn't even give them supplies. They want to spit on the hand offered to them in help, they can reap the rewards. I'd feel bad for Eric and Aaron except they're being given the option to stay. If they refused that then it's no longer on Harry for what happens to them. Anyway enough of my rambling, even with me wanting Harry to kick these guys right out (and having a feeling that's not what he will do in the end) I still absolutely love this story. Everytime I need a good story that gives me everything I could wish for in the world of the Walking dead, I know coming here will be a good time. Thank you for your fantastic work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Try to reread back your story The Contract few days ago (or is it last week?), but then its cant be opened in next chapter. So, I reread back this one. Dunno if I already put a review in this chapter, but still be waiting for next chapter... see ya! and thank you! stay health! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished this (until the last chapter written...), and I can say it was really good! Seriously, probably the longest and most fun crossover fanfic in these fandoms! I loved Daryl(Seriously! Sooo cute!), I loved Harry(Tadinho, always with his Hero/Martyr complex), I loved Luna(surprisingly, after all I hated her in your other fanfic Embracing His True Self!), I loved Merle (Very fun, I laughed a lot), Sophia, Carol (who had very little development here... ;-;), Anubis (and Hela and Celeste, who had almost zero screen time... T-T) ... Of course, there were a lot of things that were a bit... well... Like the lack of tension, the Harry/Daryl relationship, which barely has any development, Rick who seems a bit exaggerated, the secondary characters in general who seemed a bit one-dimensional, the villains who were basically cannon fodder... Simply put, it's far from perfect, but it was a great experience, especially since there is a minuscule amount of crossover between these fandoms! My suggestion, if you are interested in creating another The Walking Dead/Harry Potter fanfic, would be to start from the beginning of the outbreak, showing Harry running to get supplies and escaping, then meeting up with the Dixon's and traveling with him for a while( to be able to better present and develop the characters and their relationships), and only then reach the quarry, because one thing that was missing for me was the initial development of the relationships between the characters, like, you tried to present it later with flashbacks and such, but it didn't have the same effect of showing him getting to know himself, you know? In short, it was really good, but it was so rushed that halfway through the story there was no plot left, which ended up making the rest of the chapters monotonous... Well, that's it, I know I was a little overly critical, but know that I try to make my comment as constructive as possible, as I have a lot of appreciation for your stories (Lord of Time in specific... :3) and I wish you all the best. you! Bye! :) |