Reviews for Ice Cold |
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![]() ![]() good riddance |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far. Your writing is good just some things need to be flushed out more and you need to use some better transitions for where the story changes times and events. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I occasionally return to this story, hoping to see it updated. Perhaps one day... |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was a nice fic sad its discontinued |
![]() ![]() To bad this has been abandoned. Maybe you'll come back to it someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know that you have abandoned the story. This is just in case you change your mind. I find that I have enjoyed this story VERY much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope school will get worse for you |
![]() ![]() the story is really good i hope life treats you well just pls update when u can |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you abandoned this one, but as time passes, I hope you eventually decide to finish it. It's rather interesting and we'll written, despite some grammar issues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was well written; pity it's been abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad you won't finish this story. Maybe the writing isn't the best but I quite liked the story you told till that point and the conflict between Harry and his not-parents has the potential to be a great story arc. I'll leave a follow just in case you'll continue the story someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still think it’s a wonderful story no matter what others say! I still hold out hope you will continue this story! Though that isn’t meant to be a pressure just so you know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very good story I really enjoyed it be enjoyed it maybe you pick it up later |
![]() ![]() Shame it's gone |
![]() ![]() Harry sucked Neville dick because Neville fucked him in the ass. Fuck Neville, his parents knew he was pathetic squib. Fat piece of shit should have died. |