Reviews for Youth |
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AWESOMEROCKSTAR101 chapter 1 . 8/26/2018 Awww this was so cute, I love it! |
wavyinterlude chapter 1 . 11/23/2016 That was beautiful...! The end was sweet and ended incredibly! |
Slide In The DM chapter 1 . 4/2/2016 Honestly, this was one of the best one-shots I've ever read. The songs you chose had a relation to the story, making it even better. Their interactions and friendship felt very real- not too much fluff. Sonic's view on Amy was funny at parts, acknowledging her rather large behind, seeing her in a swimsuit, and how powerful she became. I like how Amy was portrayed in this story, a very casual teen and maybe a bit tomboyish, too. I also how you hinted at the self consciousness of Amy's body and body issues, too. (Thigh gaps) I could feel Sonic's hesitation right through the screen- the confession was lovely too! Ah, you've got a favorite. I could go on and on about this. |
MissMJS chapter 1 . 4/1/2016 Aww, so cute! I would die and go to heaven if this really happened! But, alas, Sega and Archie are jerks! D,X Oh well, this one-shot makes up for it! :D Great job, as ususal! |
Aqua Safire chapter 1 . 4/1/2016 I absolutely enjoyed reading this. I've been waiting for some Sonamy for ages! Job well done. The only advice I can give you would be to be careful with the aligning of the paragraphs, like when there would usually be something like a stanza after every set of lyrics. It just kind of seemed a bit odd as to whether it was becoming a poem all of the sudden. But, who knows? It just might be me. Oh well. Anways, keep writing, it was great story and I hope you have many more! |