Kenchi, as much as I love your stories I really think you should put this one on hold. You have a lot of projects on your plate right now, and I think those require your attention more than this one at the moment.

I also feel like your writing style isn't suited for this point of view, but that's merely my opinion which is completely up for debate. This seems like an interesting concept, but I'm not sure about your OC. I like Bellamy, but honestly he's literally Sunspot with a different personality. Not necessarily a bad thing, just not really my forte.

I hope you don't break your hand again, you need those to keep weaving your wonderful tales. :)
Looking forward to whatever you have in store for us next, and I hope you don't take my feedback as me hating on your writing as I really do enjoy just about everything you put out.

Best Regards,
Calpyso

interesting work i like your new characters! hope that you update it soon! wonder how other uses your character finds for his powers! also curious about the possible pairing! many of the x-girls are quite hot!

A couple of the paragraphd have missing lines that look like this "***," "********"
You should fix that. I would copy and past the paragraphs but i can't highlight anything on fanfic

Continue soon please

Great new story, love it! Keep up the great work!

Kenchi, I don't know how you juggle with this amount of stories. But I think this one has the makings of one of your best yet! Thank you!

So he absorbs light and if he doesn't release it he'll explode huh? Funny, pretty much means he's a weaponized balloon then.

Dude I love this fanfic already, I can't believe you left us with a cliff hanger though

I'm like it, can't wait for me

Okay.

Now what.

More please

I'm liking it a lot

Goddamnit, you've got me hooked again.

Keep em coming

Yup your sarcasm and banter are awesome

Oh I like it, I like it a lot! Why must you be so evil leaving this has a cliffhanger! Gah I hope we'll see a update soon