Reviews for Forged Within the Flame
JackTheRiPper chapter 9 . 1/28/2003
This is a really good story, you update often, it soothes me demon, lol.

But I have one itty bitty critique, You always have Severus saying "Son" at the end or somewhere of whatever he's saying to Harry, not alot, but I find that it's freaky, and weird, and sounds like something off a commercial thats like from 70 years ago, it's cheesy, and I doubt Severus would ever say that, no matter how much he loved Harry. Thats me only peeve, oh well, great stuff, baibai
Megan Baker chapter 1 . 1/27/2003
Hey Steph! I really like this story! I hope you post the other chapters soon! :-)
Earwen Uruviel Tinuviel chapter 8 . 1/27/2003
awesome chapters, really. I can't wait for more!
Seren-verch-Dafydd chapter 5 . 1/27/2003
RE: Aurors and the Order of the Phoenix.

Aurors are part of the Ministry of Magic and are similar to the American FBI or English Scotland Yard.

The Order of the Phoenix from what Rowling has published is more similar to the American CIA or English MI-5. The Order of the Phoenix may or may not be a formal part of the Ministry of Magic. I expect we will find out the answer in June when the new book arrives.
Teri chapter 8 . 1/27/2003
Two more chapters, that was quick. Thanks.
Me chapter 8 . 1/27/2003
Pretty good so far!
Teri chapter 6 . 1/26/2003
Doing a wonderful job!
Earwen Uruviel Tinuviel chapter 6 . 1/26/2003
well, that was a very good chapter. Awesome in fact. I wonder what Leanne and Sevvie dear are up to ;-) ;-) Good job though, can't wait for more
Lady Lightning chapter 6 . 1/26/2003
interesting...please continue!
Usaka chapter 5 . 1/25/2003
u have a fantastic story here and i hope u update soon, as the the auror/OotP they are two different things, anyways just thought i'de letcha know that, and plz keep up the good work! ill be looking forward to more soon, ttyl bbye

Earwen Uruviel Tinuviel chapter 5 . 1/25/2003
good chapter and I don't believe that the Aurors and the OtP is the same thing. The aurors are part of the ministry and the order I assume Dumbledore runs at Hogwarts being the base or something like that but as far as I know it they are not the same thing
Lady Lightning chapter 5 . 1/25/2003
interesting...continue please!
Teri chapter 5 . 1/25/2003
"are the Aurors and the Order of the Phoenix the same thing?" I don't think so. ~~~Glad to see the update!
the Queen of Fire and Ice chapter 5 . 1/25/2003
Jade Dagger chapter 4 . 1/24/2003
Hmm..that first review DID NOT come out right...atleast the first line didnt. Hope i didnt mess you up to bad.

Liked the talk with Remus, althogh having a slight bit of trouble with the visual of him picking up Harry. But thats just me

Hurry soon!
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