Reviews for Forbidden Desires
Guest chapter 5 . 8/29
ff1c chapter 5 . 7/27/2020
I dig it! But... I kind of dislike the fact that the story hasn't been updated since forever. I'm not a writer, but more of a reader and translator and you're better story-teller than me and i'll give you an advice: end the story, mark it up as completed (maybe a short, fun epilogue) and do a sequel, because it would be a shame to stop here!
Good work, as always!
ariedling chapter 5 . 5/27/2020
i love this
annapsarudaki chapter 5 . 4/29/2020
I want to read more of this! What kind of struggles will they encounter? How will they deal with the difficulties? Will Holly never return to Haven again?
annapsarudaki chapter 3 . 4/29/2020
What? Now I'm hooked!
Ravus Sapiens chapter 5 . 11/7/2017
How could you end it like that?!

What happens to Holly? How will Foaly react? Why would drinking alchohol completely strip Holly of her power? I know that a lot of authors here and elsewhere subcribe to the idea of alchohol destroying all connections to magic, but it didn't for the old sprite in Ho Chi Minh City.
Gankutsuou117 chapter 5 . 7/27/2017
Update please it is awesome
Nobody chapter 5 . 5/3/2017
10/10 needs more chapters... NOW!
superdude50989 chapter 5 . 3/7/2017
Looking forward to more chapters
Nasakaia chapter 5 . 12/30/2016
I love your writing style. I've read everything you have written, both here and on your other account.
Please continue!
kykkio chapter 5 . 11/28/2016
AsynchronousTextureStreaming chapter 5 . 10/29/2016
Don't leave it on a cliffhanger. Please don't.
djohagan chapter 5 . 10/15/2016
what a cliff hanger
Guest chapter 5 . 10/6/2016
Are you still there? Will you continue this story? I wanna read the smut.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/2/2016
You gonna keep going of what?
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