|Reviews for Forbidden Desires|
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/29
AHHHHHH THE SUSPENSEEE
OMG OMG OMG WE NEED A CHAPTER 6
| ff1c chapter 5 . 7/27/2020
I dig it! But... I kind of dislike the fact that the story hasn't been updated since forever. I'm not a writer, but more of a reader and translator and you're better story-teller than me and i'll give you an advice: end the story, mark it up as completed (maybe a short, fun epilogue) and do a sequel, because it would be a shame to stop here!
Good work, as always!
| ariedling chapter 5 . 5/27/2020
i love this
| annapsarudaki chapter 5 . 4/29/2020
I want to read more of this! What kind of struggles will they encounter? How will they deal with the difficulties? Will Holly never return to Haven again?
| annapsarudaki chapter 3 . 4/29/2020
What? Now I'm hooked!
| Ravus Sapiens chapter 5 . 11/7/2017
How could you end it like that?!
What happens to Holly? How will Foaly react? Why would drinking alchohol completely strip Holly of her power? I know that a lot of authors here and elsewhere subcribe to the idea of alchohol destroying all connections to magic, but it didn't for the old sprite in Ho Chi Minh City.
| Gankutsuou117 chapter 5 . 7/27/2017
Update please it is awesome
| Nobody chapter 5 . 5/3/2017
10/10 needs more chapters... NOW!
| superdude50989 chapter 5 . 3/7/2017
Looking forward to more chapters
| Nasakaia chapter 5 . 12/30/2016
I love your writing style. I've read everything you have written, both here and on your other account.
| kykkio chapter 5 . 11/28/2016
| AsynchronousTextureStreaming chapter 5 . 10/29/2016
Don't leave it on a cliffhanger. Please don't.
| djohagan chapter 5 . 10/15/2016
what a cliff hanger
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/6/2016
Are you still there? Will you continue this story? I wanna read the smut.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/2/2016
You gonna keep going of what?