|Reviews for The End of Magic|
| ScarletRainbow1 chapter 9 . 9/17
I was sorry to hear that you were leaving FF, and that this story would not be updated. I have enjoyed this story immensely. I wish you luck, and I will try to check out AO3.
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/11
don t stop now
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/15
| Harriverse chapter 7 . 7/3
Did you know Harry's full alternate name in this chapter is different than the one he created with the Goblin's?
| Harriverse chapter 5 . 7/3
So that was interesting. They will be firmly established before Stargate gets there?
| Harriverse chapter 4 . 7/3
Getting a bit complicated for me, detail wise. I knew you would utilize the Goblins and get them behind the move!
| Harriverse chapter 3 . 7/3
Boy, someone beat you with the emotion stick. Tell them to shove off because you aren't doing too bad. Tom is a load of emotional teenager.
| Harriverse chapter 2 . 7/3
Moving a bit fast. If you want to give this a bit more power, I would havehad Harry team up with the head of Gringotts. Getting to the stars with all the magical races would take rhat powerhouse behind them.
| mrpietan chapter 9 . 2/15
I tried to find you on ao3. But didn't. Would you send a link. Thank you
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/12
".." ...WHAT! NOOOOOO! DON'T LEAVE US WHO WILL WRITE GREAT STORys now! .
| LoveSpock chapter 9 . 1/5
I looked on AO3 and hope to see updates on this story soon.
Will there anything left behind to monitor for the birth muggleborns on Earth? Just thinking.
| Fallow53 chapter 9 . 12/19/2016
Thankfully you haven't deleted this yet or I would never have found it on AO3. Please dont take your stories down, use them as a teaser so that readers on FF can discover your AO3 stories? I have the habit to move deleted stories into a seperate favorite/bookmark file after I noticed that many of the stories that I was reading disappeared... By now I have a collection of over a hundred missing stories... some of them removed by FF other deleted by the writer... and no way of knowing who the original writer was or whether the story has been reposted on FF or another site...
For this story: xxxx Kudos xxxx : )
| Valheru1988 chapter 9 . 11/7/2016
Why take them down? Ican understand not updating them any more. But just leave the note here and on profile that all current and new stories can be found on AO3
| BlazeVein chapter 6 . 11/7/2016
so thats why dumbles emply lockhart... :/
| i like cheese chapter 2 . 11/3/2016
well, right off the top i'm seeing several issues.
first off, the time travel. how was that even supposed to be possible if the chip made touching magic so incredibly painful? but i'll grant you that they might have worked through the pain.
the genocide of the wizards: wtf? it's barely touched on and yet it's the most important catalyst for the whole story.
you make the muggles out to be so competent at exterminating wizards and yet they can't contain them properly? pretty sure they'd have high-powered microphones listening to every word that was said by the prisoners.
multiple wand woods, multiple cores? sigh.
tons of inheritances? sure, why not, it's not like nobody of his bloodline would ever have done the test before and inherited all that stuff before him. no sireeee. the whole concept of unclaimed vaults or inactive accounts, etc is bafflingly inane.
and of course the goblins are the superberaucrats that can do all sorts of paper-fu.
de-aging potion? no problem. never mind that a potion like that would totally invalidate voldemort's need to search for other forms of immortality. simply take a de-ager ever few decades and bam, half the harry potter story line suddenly becomes invalid.