Reviews for Weddings, Lifemates and Love
Bukoya chapter 6 . 8/24/2016
I love nick being the emotional fox and judy lifting nicks spirit up
Nats Foxine chapter 7 . 8/24/2016
This "lowering himself on one knee" thing... When you are a little girl - it's a dream. When you are a teenager it seems nice. But when you are my age... It's freaking disgusting! Really, why does everyone keep writing about this "one knee" thing? Eww! But otherwise good story. Well done.
Mr. Shortman92 chapter 7 . 8/22/2016
I loved the whole story, but I really would've liked it if they had kids. Just imagine, a few cute little funnies running around. C'mon, you know it sounds adorable! Also, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed until now. Apparently I clicked the 'Favorite' button, but I forgot to click the 'Follow' button. Oops... my bad. :/
Monster1317 chapter 7 . 8/22/2016
This was an amazing story, thank you for writing it. the best part of the entire story I would say was the first chapter where Nick reveals his love. The time jumps were really nice and easy to follow. My favorite scene from this chapter was when they finally told Judith's parents. The sexual frustration of just was s little out of place in my opinion in a story that is so fluffy. overall really great job!
Monster1317 chapter 6 . 8/22/2016
Really nice writing. This truly made my day happier. Thank you so much!
Thomas Linquist chapter 7 . 8/22/2016
Exactly the story I was looking for.

I actually liked your time jumps. It's a writing technique that gets used a lot. And bungled horribly 4/5 of the time. You pulled it off remarkably. It actually MADE this last chapter. (I do kinda wish the tiger had gotten there before Judy and bared his fangs at the goat.) It's nice to see how this came together.

Lastly, I wish you'd done a flash forward, and we'd seen a little miracle hybrid kit. Maybe just another glimpse with a short vacation during Judy's maternity leave, so Bonnie and Stu could ooh and ahh over the new addition. I kinda see a smallish fox with a red cotton tail instead of the long bushy appendage more common, and a muzzle that is a cross between Nick and Judy's.
Thomas Linquist chapter 4 . 8/22/2016
You know, Disney could do worse than turn to you for any prequel scenes or back story they need for Nick. I know they tend to trawl through tons of fanfiction if they get stuck.

You set a darn good scene too. None of that, "It was a dark and stormy night..." LOL I could picture Nick's apartment, and him putting together the little elephant onsesie that Finnick wore.
Thomas Linquist chapter 3 . 8/22/2016
What's to worry? You crawled into that fox's skull liked you lived there! You write thought very well. I dream of the day I can write a whole chapter without any dialogue whatsoever. You pull those parts off like a champ.

This story is what I was looking for. Everyone else seems to take for granted that the pair became a couple almost directly after the Night Howler case.
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 7 . 8/22/2016
Awww, this really was fluffy and sweet. Just what I needed to read. Great work!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/22/2016
It was so good that made me cry ! It was so in character and the love parts and also the sex was good not to detailed but not to vague, it was an excellent story ! Loved it too much ! I'm going to miss it ! 3
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 6 . 8/22/2016
This is so good. Great work with everything!
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 5 . 8/21/2016
Aww, this is so in character. I love it.
Matri chapter 7 . 8/21/2016
Beautifully bookended.
JustNibblin chapter 6 . 8/20/2016
I'm so glad you continued this. This fic was one of the first high quality romantic Zootopia tics I've read and I nver forgot it.
Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps chapter 6 . 8/20/2016
I really enjoyed their first date as a couple. It was very fun to see their reactions to each other, and imagine how their date would go, versus how it actually happened. You wrote it well, and I really enjoyed it because of how well it was written. So good work! :)
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