Reviews for Future Imperfect |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So classes at first was one house, now I count three different houses. Slythern with Knott, Ron with Gryphs and Abbot from the puffs asking questions in one class |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dr. AC O’Mally? Is the time traveler Draco Mallfoy? All I see in his name is Draco. |
![]() ![]() This author is bad at writing romances. A pity because i would have liked these stories better without the cheap romances in the mixt. Really ? Draco and A bartender or owner or whatever ? It seems like if a woman is intrested then it becomes instantly a love intetest even if there s no other reasons for such a thing to develop. It cheapens the story. |
![]() ![]() I hate the depiction of rosemarta. I hope she s not a love intrest. Narcissistic woman. All costumers have to ogle her and if not they are suspicious. Disgusting romance trope. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im actually so angry that it took until the rosmerta apology scene for me to get his name….. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, i'm feeling myself so dumb because of your educational diatribe :( Honestly my English is very bad so I'm reading your fiction with using auto translator (it's really good enoug lol). Anyway wanna say thank you for this work, it is very interesting and unusual |
![]() ![]() ![]() Staff congratulating students in a forbidden part of the school while being out after curfew? A strange AU. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great read! I enjoyed the story! |
![]() ![]() Hm... would Astoria really leave Scorpius behind just like that? If the old timeline continues as a parallel Universe, as has been indicated, he would be alone with a pile of keepsakes, an emancipation letter and a little cash... hope Andromeda is still there and will take care of him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. Loved the ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Astoria better figure things out soon, good chapter. I thought of Daphne being an Unspeakable, but then how would that happen when she died? Hmmm, somehow, she didn't and then she hooks up with Sirius! HaHaHa! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was going to write "sure Astoria comes back, then what about Rosmerta? AC said he'd never hurt her" Then I saw the ending here. So, a convenient way to remove Rosmerta. I was really hoping she and AC would be together, but your way was a good way for Daphne to end things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FYI: It's veritaserum, not veritas serum. YAY Amelia! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It would be great if AC gave high points to the four that stayed and the other four realized they lost out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry was kind of lame in this chapter. |