I'm having a bit of trouble with two things here. Saying that the curse brings out the worst aspects. Well you could have a great and wonderful leader who's done amazing and wonderful things have bitterness and hatred over a lost love one who's tormentor or killer got away and time to time in mind always wished to destroy said person.

Having such thoughts in mind and ways but never doing so could that curse make them since it is part of them? Then make them go further and spiral? Doing the same to similar and then people who did less and less offenses?

If so then really Dumbledore could truly be trustworthy without said curse and it just be a part he wouldn't have ever acted on normally. Dealing politically with the dark and countering them he'd have to develop manipulation skills for sure. Especially after so long. So being manipulative is a given. It's just how far he would've dared gone that could be horribly twisted.

Another is the lack of thought of mr greater goods actions. Why do they not consider memory mods and other manipulations to make teachers ignore and or forget. Same with Amelia who he would've encountered plenty. Including all alone.

That takes away a bit from beating him. If he's mostly incompacitated from the curse and not taken down himself as he was well on his way to doing. I know not really and its about punishment but its enough to be notable and a bit annoying not being able to do it himself entirely. That it reduced him randomly to a bumbling idiot despite decades of politicking and manipulation then he's basically already dealt with.

Great chapter though.

Awesome chapter and I love it. Never seen anyone do something like this in however many dozens of stories I've read.

Well damn.

He was already told the Weasleys waiting for him was due to fealty to his family and to look that up on his own.

Says elf magic will help him get last the trace. Already forgot the made up bit that he's emancipated by the wand choosing him showing his magic recognizes he's mature in mind and magic? That it has no trace added due to that?

He acknowledged it was due to her mother and home life how she was. On top of the possession she never had help with. On top of that she's 11 and hadn't done squat. While having just been through all that yet he pulled never talking to her again and not feeling bad at how cold he was to what atm is an innocent and traumatized little girl.

Also he said her mind healer can wait for their vacation.

There was a way to out Peter. He shows up on the damned map. All he had to do was get his hands on it. Maybe go to Filius and butter him up about keeping the map secret as something of his fathers. Maybe let him study and try and make his own but leaving him be as he's proved himself already by now to be trustworthy and kinda necessary for him to be out and about at times literally saving the day.

Bueno, creo que hasta aquí dejo de leer. Hay cosas que me gustan de este fic, como el cambio de los Weasley, pero hay más cosas que no me gustan, como la horrible actitud de Harry. Él le grita a todo el mundo y es bastante perturbadora su forma de ser. Ha manipulado a Hermione para que vuele en una escoba y eso está mal, si a ella no le gusta volar nadie tiene derecho a obligarla a hacer algo que no quiere. Harry insulta y le grita a todos como di a saber antes, sin embargo, cuando alguien más reacciona así, Harry los reprende y les da a entender prácticamente que están actuando como niños y deben comportarse.
Harry tampoco sabe ser muy discreto ni tampoco actuar mucho como un niño de su edad.
Hermione es más mandona de lo normal y está muy mal el que exija explicaciones de todo lo que Harry hace.
Y se porta como Giny cuando se trata de celar a Harry. En este punto ya no sé cual está peor, Giny o Hermione.
Se le dan muchos rodeos a las cosas y es algo tedioso leer las mismas explicaciones de la vida anterior de Harry o sus planes una y otra vez. Sinceramente aburre y le da mucho relleno molesto al fic.
En fin, te felicito por haberla terminado y también te digo que tienes buenas ideas, aunque te falta ejecutarlas mejor. ¡Suerte para ti! :)

Me gusta mucho esta historia, lo único que me da dolores de cabeza es el cambio de actitud de Harry hacia varios personajes. Un día en la cabeza de alguien peor que Ojo Loco. En fin, hasta ahora buena historia.

fucking stupid

still just a friend what the fuck

you ramble in you writing way to long to much stupid shit not needed for the story

its stupid to say harry cant flu travel with out falling after he got his scar fixed, it makes him look weak and no one gives a reason why he falls. so i wantaknow why he falls ?

Ok this here is the part where i would Execute all the death eaters as the grim on the way out...would be easy mode for sure.

And it was this meeting - where Arthur Weasley gives Albus Dumbledore a piece of his mind - I waited for in the book series. And its lack was the origin of my despite for the worthless headmaster. I'm very glad to see you illustrate how responsible parents would react. Thanks.