Reviews for Put into Lifetime Detention by Death
SimplyAdventures chapter 1 . 1/31/2024
So I think the warning at the beginning of the FF kind of takes you away from reading the story. It's not as crazy as you think so don't let the warning scare you away. I have read about 1/3 of this fanfiction. I like it I will say it does get drawn out a bit and I do feel you're getting a lot of the same information repetitively every time a new character is introduced and goes into detail about it instead of just saying and " I told them about the situation that happened in the Chamber of Secrets" if you're looking for a very heavy hp/hg story you're not going to find that at least in the first 2000 pages. HG is around but there's a huge section of the story where she is not. Also sometimes the timeline can be hard to follow because it'll jump from person to person and what is going on. Also for instance the first 6 weeks of summer is probably over a thousand pages of its own. Like it says it does throw every trope and crack at this fanfiction and polygamy does get brought up a lot but HP also states that he is only going to be taking one wife (hg). But I do like this fanfiction and I do think it's something that you can read over a period of time.
Mac NorthSea chapter 55 . 1/18/2024
I thought I had read (and some often re-read) all Reptilia challenge stories, I don't know how I missed this one...

It drew me in and in places it made me laugh. I couldn't stop reading it in every free moment. Excellent work!
I must say that I found the reaction of the Time displaced boy suitably "dark", as thoroughly disillusioned, hurt, used and abused young man would be behaving after his whole life deconstructed in such a way.
Anyway, great story and it is going into my favorites!
Mando-Vet chapter 55 . 1/3/2024
Absolutely amazing story from start to finish! Well done, mate.
jada951 chapter 37 . 12/30/2023
great gift, LOTR, w/ excellent challenges to go w/ them.
jada951 chapter 36 . 12/30/2023
wormtail? UGH! GRoss to the extreme. warning was right!
jada951 chapter 32 . 12/30/2023
amazing session of the Wiz.

nice to see dolores and lucius fail and fall!
jada951 chapter 29 . 12/30/2023
yikes! I just realized I'm breezing thru these chapters w/ sincere intent.

This is an excellent story!

I have read powerful harry stories before but this has real meat to it.

I like how you have involved so many of the characters of the books.

Freely helping folks like neville and oh my gosh! ron can eat neatly? Who knew!

I will try to remember to review more chapters as I go. So much has happened so far.

I can tell you I went to bed after 3 last night, as I was caught up in your story!
noylj chapter 5 . 12/21/2023
He remembered Luna. In so many stories, see Canon for example, he forgets her or simply never takes action to help her.
noylj chapter 4 . 12/21/2023
Please cure Gin before she goes potion pushing.
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 35 . 11/22/2023
I feel like im reading and i will get to chapter 55 with no resolution ir if there is it will be a rushed few paragraphs that is just an overview and not any real context. Slick feel set up by this fic.
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 25 . 11/21/2023
Out of curiosity, did you pantz this? Like every chaptwr feels like you are throwing tropes and ideas and flushing them out to no real conclusion or plot continuence. Its just plot bunnies running rampant and rampaging every chapter. It barely feels like the story is actually moving. . However i am not complaining cuz this is hilarious and pretty good. Its just it feels like we are stuck among a bunch of plots and no real action . Also things that could be exained in a paragraph are flushed out ovwr multiple conversations. All im saying is next time try to plan out every chapter and exactly what things u want to hit on . So that your not having mental diarrhea in the middle of the story. Because we are 30 chapters from the end and we havent even started 3rd year yet. The summer alone has been 20 chapters.
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 16 . 11/20/2023
Not the witches curse of judgement *gasp*idk this is so funny but you are murdering the tropes and i am here for it!
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 2 . 11/19/2023
Oh this is good, i was skeptical because of your warnings in the first chapter and then the whole long montage at the beginning. BUT this is gonna be gold and i am living to read this fic right now.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/13/2023
I don't think Minnie had any idea exactly how brutal that curse actually was.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/13/2023
Luna deservers all the happiness in the world… now I want Dementor Luna…
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