Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

good work

Way to go Nev!

"as if chased that wild dogs" - "as if chased by"?
A mighty groan on Harry's behalf, at Sirius now having to give him The Talk, and another one on Sirius' behalf, at being the one to give The Talk.
AW! at all of Dobby's most recent experiences.
And I empathize with his TV addiction, since I suffer from it too.
"standoffish" should be one word.
Yay! at Dobby's loving books. What genre is his favourite, please?
I LOVE the notebook in one of Dobby's very many pockets, and the notes he makes in there. Does he have a specific time each day set aside for looking up things from his notebook in the dictionary in the Black Library?
Hey there, Family Tonks!
AW! at the Christmas present Dobby got.
LOL at the mental pic of that velociraptor plushie.
Ted's trekking kit gift sounds ace.
"his godfather and his fiancé" - "his godfather and his fiancée".
Andromeda and Minerva's opinion of Sirius' restored motorbike made me laugh.
LOL at the mental pic of a Land Rover Dobby and Dumbles had a hand in decorating.
"Sirius asked his fiancé" - "Sirius asked his fiancée".
Remus and Sirius are not the only one who now have suspiciously shining eyes.
"hindquarters" should be one word.
And what do freshening charms do?
"falling-out" should get hyphenated.
"Peter Pettigrew, my parents' betrayer was killed" - "Peter Pettigrew, my parents' betrayer. was killed".
"for the Voldemort to die" - "for Voldemort to die".
I had to Google "ophidian".
LOL at that commiserating look David got from Harry.
"Marauder's place" - "Marauders' Place" (since not only one Marauder lives there, but Sirius AND Remus).
Well played, Harry, with that oath to Lord Fawley AND what you said to everybody at the party, in effect, after the oath.
What's "people-hopping", please?
Take THAT, for how you treated Harry in second year, Ernie McMillan!
I'd have drawn hearts around Cedric Diggory's name too, if I were Susan. And Oliver Wood's.
LOL at Neville's smirk, which I have in common with him.
Yay! for both Harry and Sirius' oaths at Fudge.
I recognise all the football players' names because I've been a journalist and copy editor for 13 years (and a second-generation journalist for the same time as both of my parents were journalists before they retired), but because I'm not sporty at all, I'm having to Google Images all of them.

I LOVE HOW HARRY TOOK OUT OL' FUDGY!

Unlike in many do-over fics, Harry is taking the high road when it comes to the Weasley family, doing whatever he can to avoid the future unfolding as it did in the other timeline. I really like that. Sure, he's not the licest person when it comes to evil gits like the Dursleys and Malfoy, but I certainly is trying to protect those he loves, even from themselves.

this story is awesome. I am really enjoying reading it. I really like how this story is one where there are a great deal of changes resulting from Harry going back in time. Keep up the excellent work and update again soon.

I really like this story.

Seriously, I really like your FF. One of the better written HP stories, that are easy to read not too long, or too short. The reader has problems leaving this story alone, honestly, I cant wait for the next chapters.

You wrote on your profile, that you are kinda disinterested in this story, since it shows every FF cliche related to HP. Well, I guess, this is right, but you have to think about it this way: On alone are more than 700.000 Fanfictions for Harry Potter. This number alone makes it nigh impossible to not have already written something before. Further I have to admit, I like your way how you deal with bashing the characters. There is a nice mix between bashing and helping them. Especially the Weasleys offer a nice view for the question: Is there a way people can change if their circumstance are changed?

I really would like to read much more about your story and cant wait for the next chapters. Please dont stop writing this story

I... I don't know what to say. You practically just popped up and wrote one of my favorite stories. And I'm talking about the top ten, amongst the likes of chem prof and Radaslab, not just *any* average stuff. And while you've posted it all in the span of one month, I'm not an idiot to not notice months, if not *years* of work here.

No, simple "well done" won't do it this time. You have my everlasting kudos and respect for this one. Keep up the great work.

I have enjoyed your story so far. I look forward to the rest of the story.
Thank You for the story.

Please update

When is harry getting together with hermione

AS I do not see any real reason to give Ron anything, he is lazy and really has not real importance to any story, on this one you portrait him as less importance character too, then see no reason to give him anything or any secret, he simple lack the brains and the man power to do or achive anything that is not eat and been jealuse. He has been outspoken about thing not going his ways, like bad mouthing Hermione or by having delirious of grand that he simple is not. So base on that I see no reason to give Ginny and equal oportunity, I do not like how she was portrait on cannon, but do not see any reason to portrait her as an easy girl too. So why Ron has to has any oportunity and Ginny do not has them. Really your not basshing for him do not demerit the story, but given him anything simple base on been Harrys friend do not add anything to the story at all. Remember that all the bad mouth about weasly on the story came from the premisy that they use love poition on Harry and Hermione and that has been deluted in the last chapter just to bring him on a group of brainy people, that he cannot fit.

I like the halloween town rerernce it is very sublte