Ok this is frightening

Great work on the break out here. I also love how Sirius is looking back on things. One thing though from this is in cannon was he also controlled then or messed with from book 4 on.

Nice to see Harry, Hermione, Luna, and Neville becoming better friends. I wonder what Ron is thinking or has he had any contact with Harry over the summer? Yes, Harry is the typical boy and doesn't see that Hermione has a problem with all of the girls wanting her to introduce them to Harry. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Smart move by Harry, now they have more allies on their side :) Nice to see a more grown up Sirius. While he still has lapses he is making the effort. Really interested in seeing how the meeting with Remus will go.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Good morning! Thanks for the updates! You might want to put pairings/characters down as subjects, i usually only scan for stories with Harry as a character. That said i've been wondering who Harry's other soulmates are. Tonks is obvious after Cass's warning on not forcing any relationships. Fleur doesnt seem to be a good one for Harry in this particular fic. Bill is pretty much perfect for her. I'd like to see Katie Bell as one. She seems to be an obvious match for Harry but gets so little love from authors. Of course just about anyone from his year would also be older than Harry.

Great chapter! Really loved all of the Harry and Sirius bonding. I like that there are more questions than answers, that means plenty of chapters of discovering things like-motives, betrayals, truths, and lies. I can't wait to see how the situation with Remus works out. Harry now has someone who knows everything he went through, nice to have a confidant that you trust. Harry now has someone to share his hatred for Dumbledore, Snape, the Weasleys and Voldemort with, must feel pretty good :)

Sirius starting to regain his facilities is very interesting. He knows something is wrong with the idea that he would go off and chase Pettigrew leaving Harry behind, and even more interesting is that the Bellatrix he grew up with would have not interest in becoming a Death Eater let alone happily murdering and torturing others. Can't wait to see how or why these things happened. Fudge's plans for Lucius were disrupted at least...maybe. Harry has some explaining to do :)

Outstanding work with this chapter here. I loved how the meeting was done her and it felt so real. Great job on that.

Great work on the back history in this chapter. I loved how you did that.

Exciting chapter between godson and godfather to father son talk

Great work showing the problems with her famliy here. I am so glad I do not have to be her dad for this headace and I have 2 girls who will be starting the teens soon.

Great post
I loved the update, i am glad Harry had a chance to talk to the Grangers and they understood where he was coming from
Until next time
Gloria

Great chapter here. I loved how you did his meeting with the groups in this chapter. I also loved the idea of the Law about registering never though some one so young could do it.

I do hope he will give Luna a book on how plastics and paper is made. One way to show it for paper is getting a thin piece of wood and some cardboard showing they are all 3 the same just how they are cut and processed are different.

Thanks for explaining the contacting situation with Harry and Hermione, it makes more sense to me now :) Another informative chapter and Crookshanks is in the house :D I like that Harry is already making plans on how he won't have multiple marriages. lol Very interesting that David Granger has the look of the House of Black. If I was Harry I would take Hermione and the Grangers to Gringotts for a heritage test, it wouldn't hurt to check. Hermione in denial about her feelings, typical teen :)