Reviews for Broken Dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The fact that ichigo didn't say anything says lot about him he's not very trusting regardless of who it is |
![]() ![]() ![]() ichigo I'm sorry to say this wait no I'm not you're not you weren't allowed to do that you may be a soul king for the Japanese mythology but this is the Norse mythology you were not allowed to do this this goes against the treaty that you have with the norse you weren't supposed to be doing that regardless of your position if its not part of your domain then you leave it alone it's common sense to leave it alone |
![]() ![]() ![]() *These actions do not reflect the values that my grandfather, Nicholas Schnee, envisioned for this company. Not 'These actions do not reflect the values that my father, Nicholas Schnee, envisioned for this company.' Nicholas Schnee is Weiss' grandfather not father. |
![]() ![]() nice step getting rid of Jacques |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish, and I found myself really drawn into the world you created. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it . Looking forward to seeing more of your work!. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate background stories where it’s told in the third person. It sounds so fake when the storyteller is talking about themselves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story skillfully blends everyday life with supernatural intrigue, deepening Ichigo’s character through family bonds and his evolving Quincy heritage. The mix of heartfelt moments, intense action, and rich lore keeps the narrative engaging and fresh. With strong world-building and tantalizing mysteries introduced, it sets a solid foundation for exciting developments ahead. Plus, i have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish, and I found myself really drawn into the world you created. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing more of your work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This may sound controversial but it would be cool for Ichigo to free this domension's Aizen and bring him back to his dimension as a subordinate, this Aizen kinda putiful snd a bit sad, also seems to have learned his lesson in humility. In general having a version of Aizen around to comment and react to stuff is cool as Aizen is cool. Also this Aizen has suffered quite a bit, he was at the height of his dream only to crumble and be forced to watch as everything went to shit due to his actions, without being able to even move or do anything, only to be even robbed if his consciousness and stuffed into a layered soul for thousands of years... It would feel nice and powtic for him to be saved by... Ichigo of all people. Also even if he failed as his dream he can still live them trough Ichigo accomplishing them as hom, or a version of him, had a hand on Ichigo's creation, it would be like... you could what I couldn't... poetic and cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ichigo better unlock Sode no Shirayuki’s Bankai. I hope Shiro and Ossan are gonna keep both Blut Vene and Hierro perma-active during the fights. I’ll laugh if he copies/takes Yhwach’s [ALLMIGHTY]. That way, he can make more physical defences for himself. You can ALWAYS use more defense |
![]() ![]() very interesting lore being revealed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every time the author decides to use "Konnichiwa" all I can imagine is Keanu Reeves in the movie Street Kings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man, I'm suddenly remembering why I only made it like 20% of the way through this novel first time I tried reading it. The insistence on using Japanese terms or phrases that are almost always translated to english is just frustrating. especially when its random. Everyone else is using their accepted translated name, but apparently Sona gets stuck with the Romaji SHITori instead of the widly accepted Sitri its still Asia, not Āshia Arujento its still Rias, not Riasu Guremorī |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, suddenly both Katanas are using the exact same name. whatever happened in the latest editing did some weird stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So suddenly the two Katanas are named the exact same? whoops. all Yorugetsu, no Kagamigetsu any more. |