Reviews for Arvum
ChaosCreator24 chapter 4 . 6/2/2022
the fathers always get so overprotective of their precious daughter
ROUTE-L chapter 1 . 4/16/2022
I really love this fic, i'll wait for your next update
karen chapter 9 . 4/6/2022
I really love this fic, i really wat to know how naruto and kakashi's relationship will end after the deadline.
please continue the good work
Guest chapter 9 . 8/10/2021
YES! I LOVE THIS SHIP AND THE FLUFF AND I AM HERE FOR IT DAMMIT!
LadyHokageSama chapter 9 . 8/9/2021
Welp, overprotective big brother Iruka sure isn't happy. But that's to be expected from him ️ I'm really sad you aren't updating this story anymore, but I'm sure you have your reasons. It was nice while it lasted.
LadyHokageSama chapter 7 . 8/8/2021
Danzo is an absolute piece of scum for giving them such a horrible ultimatum! Somebody please kill him!
LadyHokageSama chapter 5 . 8/7/2021
Flesh eating bunnies? I smell a Monty Python killer bunny reference... And even if I'm wrong, I'm not! I refuse to be wrong about this! Lol. Also, how did Naru and Kakashi think they weren't gonna be caught while trying to kidnap deer from the Naras? Obviously they'd get caught! Lol
LadyHokageSama chapter 4 . 8/6/2021
That last scene with them looking through the scrolls was so heartwarming
CagedHeart7 chapter 9 . 7/30/2021
It'd be really awesome if you continue this story, you know. It's one of a kind. I think someone has started a very similar story giving your reference and all, on AO3...but still, I want to see where YOU take this. At least a single chapter that sums up wjat happens next!
Marcefriasu chapter 9 . 7/13/2021
Ooh. I wanted more
mugen Tsukuyomi chapter 9 . 7/7/2021
Author be like “Hmm how can I find a way to make a 26 year old fuck a 13 year old without looking like a sussy baka.”
AuthorXAtXTempt chapter 9 . 5/20/2021
Looking forward to the next chapter. This can be your resolution in 2021. There are few good KakaNaru fanfics out there
Starliner346 chapter 7 . 5/15/2021
Well damn
Kyle Antonio chapter 9 . 5/4/2021
Where the next one
fifi chapter 9 . 4/6/2021
Please tell me that naruto's fuinjutsu is improving and that she plans to add her personal touch to her new cozy nest because it would be really insulting for an uzumaki veteran of the most terrible of ninja wars to sabotage himself by a bad root !i really hope naruto gets rid of the danzo breaking plant soon !the story is really cool, the new sibling family relationship and romance are cute. and i'm glad naruto is more competent this time around than in her same age past, but it's still a little disappointing that she doesn'tgained environmental awareness with her battle with all these badass as a single root limb gets out of reach, please kurama help her to at least have the same kind of perception as in her bijuu mode! !despite her mental age, it is a bit disturbing to imagine a thirteen year old girl losing her virginity when she is barely having her period! and why the hell kushina didn't get that same kind of treatment, these fucking old men couldn't have waited until naruto was at least 15. go kakashi naruto you have to copulate to close the fossil flap. I am already wonderingshikamaru's reaction to this news !sorry sasuke but naruto is taken, it looks like you got stuck with the harpies !I can't wait for the team assignments, it would be easy to have Sai in my pocket since at this age he is recoverable, already in the chronology he was a trusted friend ! in any case good continuation !
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