Reviews for Arvum
fariedom chapter 3 . 3/12/2021
I really like this story so far! I was originally hesitant to read it because it's incomplete and hasn't been updated in a long while, but then I gave a newer story claimed to inspired this one a shot, it was so jumbled and confusing so I was aw heck, I really need to read the original.

I think that you handled wedding off a 13-year-old to an adult remarkably well! I can't usually swallow the age gap when Naruto is still a kid, but the way you set up the marriage as something of "the best out of the worst circumstances" is clever. I only really had one critique so far and it was referring to Kakashi as the last Uchiha. Kakashi is in no way an Uchiha hahaha, but even if that was a bit of head-scratcher it won't deter me from reading the rest :)
AngelousPoofy chapter 3 . 2/24/2021
Wait what the fuck, wait- is she still 12? IS SHE STILL 12? WAIT HUH?
Adonisx chapter 9 . 2/22/2021
omg they're absolutely adorable!
kinyochan chapter 9 . 2/16/2021
Happy place happy place this story makes me happy
Guest chapter 9 . 12/31/2020
Please update soon
Tsuruga Lia1412 chapter 9 . 12/21/2020
Me gustó mucho estos capitulos.
Ramen.noeldles chapter 3 . 12/17/2020
Yooo but aren't they like 26. So like a 16 year age gap?
ramsesjames05 chapter 5 . 9/12/2020
Kakashi jealous so cute!
Sugar0o chapter 9 . 8/6/2020
this is great
Guest chapter 9 . 7/30/2020
Actualiza pronto, esta muy linda tu historia
SmutLover4Ever chapter 9 . 7/8/2020
This is probably the 10th time I've read this story by now and it's still absolutely amazing. I really, really wish you'd continue this story. It would just be such a waste to leave it like this...
HEART BEATZ 24'7 chapter 9 . 6/27/2020
This is so beautiful! I want MORE! Please please please update!
HEART BEATZ 24'7 chapter 4 . 6/27/2020
I LOVE IT! such a beautiful story...
CheshireKat2197 chapter 9 . 6/14/2020
Please update soon!
Amaterasu53 chapter 9 . 5/9/2020
Such a good story - can you update?
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