Reviews for Arvum |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story so far! I was originally hesitant to read it because it's incomplete and hasn't been updated in a long while, but then I gave a newer story claimed to inspired this one a shot, it was so jumbled and confusing so I was aw heck, I really need to read the original. I think that you handled wedding off a 13-year-old to an adult remarkably well! I can't usually swallow the age gap when Naruto is still a kid, but the way you set up the marriage as something of "the best out of the worst circumstances" is clever. I only really had one critique so far and it was referring to Kakashi as the last Uchiha. Kakashi is in no way an Uchiha hahaha, but even if that was a bit of head-scratcher it won't deter me from reading the rest :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait what the fuck, wait- is she still 12? IS SHE STILL 12? WAIT HUH? |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg they're absolutely adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy place happy place this story makes me happy |
![]() ![]() Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me gustó mucho estos capitulos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yooo but aren't they like 26. So like a 16 year age gap? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kakashi jealous so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great |
![]() ![]() Actualiza pronto, esta muy linda tu historia |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably the 10th time I've read this story by now and it's still absolutely amazing. I really, really wish you'd continue this story. It would just be such a waste to leave it like this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful! I want MORE! Please please please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! such a beautiful story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a good story - can you update? |