Reviews for Pretty Hate Machine II
FoxyFoxation chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
Mate, this was beautiful, I really think this could develop into a story or atleast a few more chapters maybe. It was really damn good.
I'm glad I read this, but I wish there was an even happier ending, would be nice to see the gang all get back to atleast something of their former selves.
As for Blake, I can't really say she betrayed them. I dunno what they were 'hunting' for when they killed Ren, or who exactly killed him. If it wasn't Blake herself or her direct order then I dunno if she really betrayed them, she can't control every member of the Fang, she can't erase every single ounce of hatred and violence the others may commit.
Also Yang was just... so broken, hurt my feels so much. The way you portrayed her was great, I just wish she could get some semblance of who she used to be back.
Should you ever make more of this, I shall follow!

DarthImpox chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
I love this and I was wondering if this was just a one shot or if you will continue this story.
Draconus545719 chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
I like it